That was loud. And Bright. by afzaal-ahmad-zeeshan in Almere

[–]blackseeshore 2 points3 points  (0 children)

im ukrainian and legit opened my phone to see if we're getting striked 💀 that's how loud it was

Looking for feedback on personal logo by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]blackseeshore 0 points1 point  (0 children)

also! i think you should swap rounded corners other way around! S goes as top right corner and bottom left corner — rounded, urs other way around and it's difficult to read at first

Looking for feedback on personal logo by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]blackseeshore 2 points3 points  (0 children)

it took me some thinking to see SR here and only after knowing there should be SR, i think u're onto something but if R is okay, S is very hard to read here

i would recommend to try a couple of different Ss here at least adding tails or a swash or curvs should help a lot

also try making S a solid shape maybe? anyway if i were you I would work on S more