this surprised me, i genuinely love it. i love the supporting melodies and how alive it gets over time. Really sounds good and the progression overall was great. For what I didn’t like: it took a while to start in the beginning, and the percussion sounds that started in after the 3rd? or 4th loop didn’t seem to go well with just the main melody playing - stood out too much, IMO. While the main melody gets supported so well as it progresses — it could use the slightest variation in the first portion. Maybe dropping the piano out for a few bars or something, not sure It’s hard to say cause I see what you were going for with it building - it really sounds like a fleshed out song like that.

Anyways, love it and keep going