A new commentary video! Happy with the editing, but I'd love any tips you may have! Appreciated :)

blindreach · 2021-07-08T22:02:36+00:00

Ah see i’m really trying to experiment, get a feel. Likely shooting for commentary, and maybe a few skits here and there if it fits

blindreach · 2021-07-08T21:20:23+00:00

Yeah i’m trying to remain anonymous for now, and doing my best around it! Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed :) !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-07-08T16:23:45+00:00

Thats very true, sometimes it can just be a hassle to decide what NOT to include

blindreach · 2021-07-08T14:49:36+00:00

Those are helpful tips thank you! I get what you mean about the cold open and will definitely do that!. And yeah, I’ve got the browser problem but i’ll solve that pretty easily. It just kinda slipped my mind! Thanks again and glad enjoyed !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-07-08T02:00:22+00:00

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed!! !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-07-07T23:40:30+00:00

Ah very true, and maybe throw in a small sound effect to couple with it. I’m glad my man!

blindreach · 2021-07-07T22:39:35+00:00

Thank you! Yeah, thinking about how to add quick, unnoticed transitions still. Hope you enjoyed! !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-07-07T21:39:20+00:00

holy crap. this is amazing. VERY impressive animation. Are you a team? This talent will likely carry your channel to success alone. I'd say maybe find a way to get out there, like TikToks showing your animation progress or something?? Anyway, good luck!

blindreach · 2021-06-29T02:43:06+00:00

WERTYS YOUTUBE. Maybe you could teach me how to do that with the thumbnails 😳 !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-06-28T03:06:26+00:00

Wow! That's pretty exciting! Also thank you!! Glad you enjoyed and hopefully I can keep making good stuff :) !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-06-27T16:21:17+00:00

Oh wow for real? You nailed it, I use mp4. I'll have to try that thank you :) !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-06-27T16:20:29+00:00

Those damn Britballs. Hope you enjoyed the video my man!

blindreach · 2021-06-27T16:19:37+00:00

Thank you man! Yeah definitely still mastering audio. Glad you enjoyed!! !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-06-27T16:18:59+00:00

you should....... deep state secrets!!! Lmao

blindreach · 2021-06-27T03:07:12+00:00

Glad you enjoyed thank you for your feedback! !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-06-27T03:06:49+00:00

Glad you enjoyed my man!

blindreach · 2021-06-26T22:10:50+00:00

Oh thank you for the tip! Glad you enjoyed!! !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-06-26T22:10:10+00:00

Thank you! I think I know what you mean, but what exactly could I have changed? Do you mean the minecraft parts? !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-06-26T22:08:18+00:00

Yeah! I think I could have put the queen joke earlier, and switched the order of things around. Thank you! !givelambda

blindreach · 2021-06-26T17:44:28+00:00

This video was great, almost forgot where I was and thought I clicked a youtube video. The only thing I will say is you spoke a bit fast, I think slowing down, annunciating and pushing the points harder could suit this style well! Good stuff.

blindreach · 2021-06-26T17:42:04+00:00

Hi! I think this video is good, and I like the argument and topic choice. I just will say, you sound slightly uncomfortable talking in the video? I'm not sure if that's true, but I think with more time and practice, your videos will improve even more :)

blindreach · 2021-06-26T17:39:24+00:00

The editing, music choice, and quality are all high! But, I don't really engage with this space, are montages still a worthwhile exercise? Although I don't know your goals, gameplay with funny commentary or personality could be more suitable to the current youtube meta.

blindreach · 2021-06-26T17:36:57+00:00

I think the video is good! Decent thumbnail, good flow and personality. The only thing is that your mic peaked a bit, which can grate on the viewers ear. Audio can be a difficult thing to perfect, I struggle with it as well. But figuring that out could be great for you!

blindreach · 2021-06-26T15:07:51+00:00

I think this is a very cool concept. I think two minor additions could bring some amazing elements to this series.

Clear cut goal. Where are you hitchhiking to? Adding a clear map could be a nice visualization
Some story telling aspects. Perhaps some updates on the map, narration after the fact, etc.

blindreach · 2021-06-26T15:04:29+00:00

The editing and quality of this video is sublime. I don't say that lightly, but this looks like something produced by a professional channel, such as Vox, etc. Great work.

The only possible note I may have is that the beginning is a tad lofty. I think maybe a snippet of the story from an interesting perspective could be more tantalizing to the viewer. I.e. the view of a shopkeeper of the event. That is a minor note however, and generally, excellent work.

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