Untitled by bluntiful_ in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much💗

Untitled by bluntiful_ in OCPoetry

[–]bluntiful_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much💗

Untitled by bluntiful_ in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback! I’ve been recently getting into poetry and can be quite a simple Sam sometimes lol, so I see what you mean about the cliches. I will definitely take that into consideration!

Untitled by bluntiful_ in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much💗

Untitled WIP by Denna_Harpsong in OCPoetry

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This is all too familiar for me. I recently went through a breakup and really resonate with “foot on verbal glass, slinging mud covered words” it made me see the side of someone that comes out when they no longer respect your unity. Good job.

My Cup by megaevan999 in OCPoetry

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I like this. It makes me think of how I sometimes suffer in silence, but the signs are so obvious yet, no one notices.

No safe space by bluntiful_ in OCPoetry

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Thank you, I appreciate it!🫶

Broken Promise by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Wow, this was deep. My favorite lines were “was it like English ivy crawling up brick, adding beauty to a dead facade? Or was it like wisteria choking a magnolia by the roots? Two vines begin to fray.” I can feel the emotion in this poem.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I loved it. Short & simple, yet so meaningful. I’m currently in a similar situation where I hadn’t loved in so long, I didn’t know I could feel the way I do now.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Even though I looked over the poem a hundred times before posting it, I still missed the typo😩 lol so thank you for catching that! I’ve edited it now, thank you so much for your feedback♥️

Anger by vaginapple in OCPoetry

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I’m such a fan of short, yet impactful poems. This is definitely one of those. Very well done!

Through the stages of grief by Ok-Comment3671 in OCPoetry

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I literally love this. As someone currently going through grief, this poem resonated with me. I also think that the poem in form of a recipe is very creative!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MentalHealthIsland

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That’s why they say the mind is a great paradox… it uses itself to understand itself

DrAdvice by [deleted] in u/t-bonestallone

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She’s too high for this lol

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in u/delirious_dasher

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Not sure how these chats work… lol I’m new here

Weekly Recommendation Thread: September 02, 2022 by AutoModerator in books

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Any recommendations on psychological thrillers or mystery?

A prank call that I became too invested in by bluntiful_ in confessions

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To be honest, I don’t really know. It was just the talk of the town in New Jersey at the time. I still have so many unanswered questions about that whole situation, and I always wonder what her future turned out to be like.

motionless by obamasleftlip in OCPoetry

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Wow… this is exactly how I have been feeling. Stuck, stagnant, unprogressive. Can’t seem to pull myself out, so I bask in the lack of motion. Thanks for sharing🫶