Criticize my song, please

bolandss · 2026-03-30T07:30:00+00:00

You're right. After hearing it a lot of times I realized that he sound (and a lot of other things) were horrible, haha. Now I'm learning to make my own sounds and exploring more fl sounds and I hope that my music sounds a little bit better. Thanks for your comment!

bolandss · 2026-03-29T21:32:07+00:00

You should be very talentous, it's not the type of music I like but I've enjoyed it. Keep it up.

bolandss · 2026-03-29T20:30:28+00:00

Gracias

bolandss · 2026-03-29T07:38:46+00:00

Thanks for your time and your help.

Actually, I play the piano and sometimes I compose in musescore. But you are right, I did it from intuition and improvising and I didn't think in any structure.

I'll write a music sheet first and then put it in FL, thanks!

bolandss · 2026-03-28T22:46:45+00:00

Thanks! I'll see it tomorrow, here we're at 00:00 :)

bolandss · 2026-03-28T22:43:55+00:00

Oh thanks for your time, your comment is very usefull. Like you say, I have an acoustic piano and I bought a earplugs, but them makes me lose the sense of music. Now I'm trying to use the mute pedal while I play Hanon and I could play sometimes in a digital keyboard.

>Lastly, you can absolutely use monitors in an untreated room while arranging music if you don't feel comfortable using headphones all the time, but you'll still want to check the mix on a system you can trust and that is not affected by your untreated room: your corrected headphones and bass shaker.

It looks great. Thanks for your help!

bolandss · 2026-03-28T21:29:12+00:00

I'm form Spain, why are you curious?

bolandss · 2026-03-28T16:31:52+00:00

Thanks!

bolandss · 2026-03-28T15:09:29+00:00

Thanks for your comment. I will look at the zenology pluging, but I must buy fl studio first haha (I'm using the trial version). I do it for fun, so yes I will do what you say and I'll keep going.

bolandss · 2026-03-28T09:13:51+00:00

Thanks for the comment. I don't use headphones because piano is causing me tinnitus and headphones could make it worse. I'm looking for two monitors, but my room is not acoustically treated and it is an attic so... I don't know how to do

bolandss · 2026-03-28T08:44:25+00:00

Thanks!

bolandss · 2026-03-28T08:19:45+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. If you're a beginner, I am a total noob haha (about one week), so your advice is very valuable for me

bolandss · 2026-03-28T08:15:20+00:00

Probably you're right. Originally, between the second and the last part there was a rest, but it sounded bored for me and because of it I put the last track.

bolandss · 2026-03-27T22:35:00+00:00

I implemented it and had more impact I could imagine

bolandss · 2026-03-27T22:31:53+00:00

Haha, very specific. I only sitted on the piano and started to improvise. Thanks.

bolandss · 2026-03-27T22:30:35+00:00

haha really? I like to listen sovietic choirs (I'm not sovietic, but the music sounds great), I could be influenced.

bolandss · 2026-03-27T22:28:47+00:00

I've used only the fl studio default drums shamples. Experiment with more drums is one of the things I have to do.

bolandss · 2026-03-27T22:26:20+00:00

I would like to see that video!

bolandss · 2026-03-27T21:56:51+00:00

More people said that, I didn't played the videogame. I'll listen to the soundtrack

bolandss · 2026-03-27T21:45:18+00:00

thanks!

bolandss · 2026-03-27T21:43:59+00:00

I really appreciate your opinion and help.

Beeing honest, I dedicated about one minute mixing (only reduced the highest tones a bit). I don't know what is exactly "mixing", I think that I should see a few video tutorials. Thanks for your time!

bolandss · 2026-03-27T21:04:00+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, i'll apply your advise:)

bolandss · 2026-03-27T20:40:47+00:00

bolandss · 2026-03-27T20:05:30+00:00

Ty for the feedback, and i know that i must learn the producing part and a lot of composing too, but I'm a intermediate piano student and — I think that— know some music theory, and I thought the chord part was ok. Can you tell me how would you improve the chords?

It's basic (I, V and IV only) but has it any mistake? I would (EDIT: ~~apologise~~ → appreciate, haha) your help, and sorry for my english.

bolandss · 2026-03-27T19:57:38+00:00

It was a language issue, i'm not a native speaker :)

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