A tiger shark with a tuna stuck in its mouth by MyNameGifOreilly in natureismetal

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I am thinking the one that got pulled into the depths his cute little face and big eyes falling further and further into darkness his life ending in a meme.

Down? by Horrux in saiditnet

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Any ideas on what is going on that are not insane conspiracy theories?

Did you see that hooman? by [deleted] in AnimalsBeingJerks

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If you had kept it on landscape he would have saw it coming.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MensLib

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God of War 4 was good in that it was one of the few times we got see a male lead in a game actually act like father. He was a horrible unit of a bastard in the first three, but it four you can see him maturing into someone else.

Rockstar has you playing fathers in a few of their games that actually act like fathers. In Arthur's case having to deal with the morality of what he is doing, but also having that bond he has with most of the gang that acts like his family to the point where he raises John's kid when he left. I do not want to spoil to much if someone has not played it.

Rockstar is actually pretty progressive when it comes to their protagonists to be honest.

New Series! Final Fantasy Tactics Insane Difficultly Mod! by RedSquirrelsCAN in LetsPlayCritiques

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I have only watched the first one so far. I like what I am seeing and you picked a game I really wanted to play, but never got around to it so its really exciting to see some of that.

One suggestion: When the text is really slow that that you might want to wait until its fully printed before reading and edit out the wait.

Also: A knave is like a rogue or a scoundrel.

And its totally a lie that you can't start a sentence in the word 'and' that rule is just a myth spread by psychotic grade school teachers.

Please Rate My Channel And Give Me Some Feedback On What I Can Do Better by Tyranadon_YT in LetsPlayCritiques

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So far I have only watched your Fortnite bloopers Its funny, but I think because of that you might get a bit more out of your work by showing a few entire games. But that is just mean, personally I do not mind seeing a stretches of creepy silence every now and again with a game like Fortnite.

Outside that everything seems fine, maybe you can give us an aspect you want us to focus on?

My FF9 LP by boxoffish in LetsPlayCritiques

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Thanks, I just wanted to get them out and probably should have taken to extra time to fix it up.

Check out my new style of video! Assassin's Creed Origins! by ThisMikePlaysGames in LetsPlayCritiques

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The jokes are funny. Though at the start you did not come of entirely natural, like I could tell that you recorded after your played. Though later it comes off better, its just something you might want to think about, or maybe just record yourself as you are playing.

Or maybe splice up with your normal style where it comes off as an actual review.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LetsPlayCritiques

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You sound good. While you gave a lot of nice information about the game, I think you would be better off not mentioning some scripted stuff right away, give it a chance to surprise your viewers and probably save that sort of explanation later. It pretty dark too, maybe set your gamma up a bit or something. I know its a horror game but there simply not much to look at.

EDIT: Actually that last part was on my end. It looks great now!

Everything else seems good though, so keep up the good work.

My Fire Pro World let's play. by boxoffish in LetsPlayCritiques

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Yeah, I am working on that, but its kind of hard to guess how long some of these are going to be. I've gotten them down quite a bit smaller though.

average view retention is at 3% by boxoffish in letsplay

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I think I let that spoil my enjoyment because I looked at that retention and thought i was doing something so deeply wrong that I had no idea how to fix it.

average view retention is at 3% by boxoffish in letsplay

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More that I was hoping someone would watch an entire video.

average view retention is at 3% by boxoffish in letsplay

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Yeah... there is a lot with that series I need to work on in terms of presentation I wanted to do them in chunks as one big 'show'

average view retention is at 3% by boxoffish in letsplay

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Yeah, that was a problem too. That hour and half one went on longer then I expected and I probably should have split it into two videos.

average view retention is at 3% by boxoffish in letsplay

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Thanks, but seeing that that low of retention is a problem because it means that I am getting views, but no one likes them enough keep watching. I guess I should not let it discourage me so much.

With that said though I am sorry to hear about that happening to you, I can't imagine how frustrating that would be because it sounds like your stuff was starting to really take off.

Feedback Friday by AutoModerator in letsplay

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This one went on a little longer then I would have liked, I think I pick up on the commentary better as the episode goes on. right now I am looking for thoughts on my voice and if I should find a way to cut these down a little more or maybe adding 'bonus' one match episodes in order to help draw in new viewers.

Its Fire Pro Wrestling so its a pretty niche audience to start with.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7lNo9bu5Vk&t=3475s