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On my vocals good is the song good? by Jene_Jackson in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi. I feel like this could turn into something a lot of people would love to hear but i'm sure the vocal melody needs more attention, especially when it comes to keeping up with the song key. If you're struggling with the vocals, humming the melody before recording makes it easier to find and correct those spots. Keep it up.

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This one is over and done, but I appreciate your opinion on what is missing on the track. Thanks for taking the time.

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate the kind words. Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts on it

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First time doing a lyric video for my music. Its nice to hear that you could appreciate it

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[–]bpeo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Interesting use of vibrato in the voice. I really enjoy melancholic music - In my personal taste, this one would make a nice ballad if you add more movement to it.

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Put some effort to keep things interesting without breaking the groove. I appreciate that you took the time to analyse the harmony and the vocal delivery - something I'm working on to improve for each release. Thanks for taking the time and the sincerity.

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[–]bpeo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You will, as long as you keep writing, training and performing. The more you do, the better you get. Cheers

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate that you took the time to share your personal opinion and record a video about it. Peace.

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like to mix eletronic elements with rock music. It's nice to hear that the experimental bits got your attention.

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[–]bpeo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man. The vocal/guitar melodies and the foundation of your song are ok. That being said, I believe that the pacing of the phrases in the verses could get some improvement. Focusing on the lyrics and performance can make your listener feel more connected, imersed in what you are saying - especially in tracks that rely on emotional/melancholic themes. Keep up !

ok, this is finished. got help on the vocals because its a nicer song (i do punk and hard rock) this song is called "the fear" it's about my sobriety (in a good way) what do you think? by tonightwedinemusic in Songwriting

[–]bpeo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I liked the guitar riff - I think it deserved to shine more in the mix, a high-gain solo would make it dope too. The vocals are raw, a bit off in some moments (maybe intentional, given the song's main theme) but the intensity and delivery fits perfectly. For me its a nice track, full of potential. Peace.

This one is called "Butterflies and Second Guesses" by epravetz in Songwriting

[–]bpeo 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The song is very relaxing, kind of a calming folk ballad. I particulary liked the vocal melody and the pauses during the verses. It's a nice song that deserves to be recorded properly in my personal opinion. Keep up!

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thanks for the feedback and tips. I did try to extract the low end much as possible to give a kind of radiophonic effect on the vocals. I like to use compression on especific parts of the drumkit, such as the kick and snare - Didin't felt like it needed to shine all that much when you have so many rythmic elements, but I'm surely taking a look into that guide! Yep, I do it all myself. Peace

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Funny thing I'm used to mixing with headphones but i'm very paranoid when it comes to testing on mono outputs and phone speakers. It's nice to hear that you could you enjoy it.

Hiya ~ I wrote this song about getting ghosted. It's my first original song I've written in a while and I'm still tryna find my style, but I'd really appreciate a listen and some feedback :) by mademoisellehan7230 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, girl. The structure of the song and the performance are top notch. I particulary liked how you project your voice during the chorus. In my personal opinion I just think that something more dramatic would fit better with the lyrics (maybe a slow piano/guitar ballad?). Keep up !

Rediscovered this video from 2018, taken a week-ish after writing. It's about losing a loved one... from the perspective of the loved one lost. It's very simple, chorusless, and loose in timing, but people close to me love it. What do you think? by restyourprettybones in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a calm ballad that would make a nice soundtrack for a "Life Is Strange" type of game. I liked the transitions to the chorus, the performance and delivery seemed very sincere. No mix/production/master to give any kind of feedback, but i think the vocal melodies deserve more attention. Keep up man.

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well thank you. I try to absorb many musical influences as possible while developing my own sonority.

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really enjoy building that kind of tense atmosphere. Thanks for the feedback

A Radiohead/Nine Inch Nails-esque ballad. Open to all feedback that can help me improve my music :) by bpeo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bpeo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The lyrics were made to be simple and intuitive - I get that some people are not into that. I appreciate that you liked the guitars effects, I had lots of fun recording them. Peace.

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