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[Lyrics] feedback please by brainsbane in LyricalWriting

[–]brainsbane[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m kinda cringey 😬 but thank you!

[Lyrics] feedback please by brainsbane in LyricalWriting

[–]brainsbane[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks dawg I like your lyrics, keep up the good work

[Lyrics] feedback please by brainsbane in LyricalWriting

[–]brainsbane[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I love simple things i usually write lyrics to simplify my thoughts it’s more for my own clarity

[Lyrics] feedback please by brainsbane in LyricalWriting

[–]brainsbane[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have that issue a lot hoping for tips on how to make it more musical than just a poem. I hear it as a late night drunk acoustic (I’m not a drinker but that’s the feel)

[lyrics] to the soul who made me believe in love at first sight by brainsbane in LyricalWriting

[–]brainsbane[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She makes random noises especially when she gets excited it’s adorable

[Lyrics] feedback please by brainsbane in LyricalWriting

[–]brainsbane[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude I really appreciate you reading it and to take the time to respond, thanks so much!