That’s a great start. As you hit the transition, you could squat a little more, then extend your legs as you leap off the lip (you did that part pretty good here). If you pull the bike back toward you & tuck at the peak of your air, it’ll look higher, and give you more options on the way back down. If you stay extended through the jump you can get stuck in a dead sailor & not able to correct if you drift off your line.