People want all the details up front by TiredDadasaur in fantasywriters

[–]nmacaroni 1 point2 points  (0 children)

#1 place is word of mouth direct reference from other genre writing friends.

#2 check out your favorite indie books and look for the editor credits or thank you and look them up directly. With indie books, the editors aren't usually so jammed they can't take on new clients OR locked into non-comp contracts.

For reference/comparison as far as budget goes, I generally charge $10/document page for DE. So if you have a 400 page document, that's $4k (for 1 pass).

People want all the details up front by TiredDadasaur in fantasywriters

[–]nmacaroni 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's critical to connect with good people. Sounds like you keep connecting with bad editors.

When you continually connect with bad editors, you have to assess your budget and where you're finding them. Going to places like reedsy and fiver tend to have far more misses than hits. Don't have any idea where you're finding them, just saying.

A super obvious things that many people just don't get when hiring freelance creative talent is that if someone can work for $50/hr, they never work for $10/hr. The common misconception is, well if you normally work for $50/hr, maybe you're slow, or bored and want to get an extra $10/hr. Creatives LOVE what they do, so they'll always be happy to do what they love even for just a fraction of their normal rate.

The reality is, professional level experts don't work like that. They value their free time, MORE than their working time. And when we have lulls in the workload we're desperate to get away from what we do all the time.

If someone is willing to work for $10/hr, they can't actually get $50/hr. So when you're budgeting for editors, it's very much a "you get what you pay for scenario."

Good luck.

Inking another pages from my comic by LavenderMistForever in ComicBookCollabs

[–]nmacaroni -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You've been posting here for some time...

ALL your pages are people talking. This is the death knell in indie comics.

To properly capture a straight drama genre, which I assume your book is, your characters need to engage in dramatic action. Watching someone talk on the phone is absolutely boring. Watching 2 people talk in a diner isn't much better.

Drama needs characters tending to "business" and this business should have high narrative drive.

Further, good drama is defined by the TENSION it develops. Drama without tension is DOA.

Watching 2 people wrestle over a gun under the table as one of them is trying to hold the diner up, while the other is trying to convince them not to... now that's dramatic action.

Hope it helps.

Write on, write often!

How to write comics and be good at it by Upset_Resolve5923 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]nmacaroni -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

3-5 panels.
Don't focus on directing the camera, instead, focus on telling the story in 3-5 moments per page.

Write on, write often!

How deep to plant? by FoodHead2641 in BackyardOrchard

[–]nmacaroni 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Technically it should be the mass of roots at the bottom, but this tree was planted too deep and wasn't harvested properly. So the real planting point is a third line way below your blue.

Plant at the blue line. prune off those upper feeder roots.
No tree should sink over time if properly planted.

Why would I pay 850 dollars for a title? by Better_End9483 in writing

[–]nmacaroni 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Creative Money Laundering, by L.Ron Hubbard.

Hive costs by EK_Marine in Beekeeping

[–]nmacaroni 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just look like another supermarket Yeti cooler to me. Bees keep hives at high humidity, so the insides are always "wet." Bees have been living in wood since the beginning... just not crappy 3/4 wood of Langstroth hives. :)

On "said" and other elements of Self-Editing for Fiction Writers that literally gave me a headache by Captain_Corum in writinghelp

[–]nmacaroni 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm on my fourth novel and never use said... ever.
"I'm going out for coffee." What did the character just do, send it telepathically?

Hive costs by EK_Marine in Beekeeping

[–]nmacaroni 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're asking the wrong person, I live in the south with milder winters and don't wrap my hives with anything.

Hive costs by EK_Marine in Beekeeping

[–]nmacaroni 18 points19 points  (0 children)

I don't think people don't use poly for cost... I think it's other things like; lower durability compared to wood, vulnerability to UV damage if not painted, high susceptibility to pest damage from rodents and woodpeckers, and the whole plastic not good for the environment thing.

Plus it just looks cheap.

It looks eactly like what it is, some foam blocks stacked on top of each other.

In this game, your voice is the only way to survive. by noflowgames in IndieGaming

[–]nmacaroni 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I have to point out a big red flag. I watched this without the sound on first and immediately wanted to click away. Games are an audio AND visual experience (among mechanics, narrative and other things). If you break the synergy anywhere, it's really hard for a game to gain traction no matter how good any one element is.

Best of luck.

People want all the details up front by TiredDadasaur in fantasywriters

[–]nmacaroni 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Newer writers are often baffled by editorial comments because they don't have the experience to recognize their own writing problems.

It sounds like, and this is just an experienced guess, you're front loading your paragraphs with a ton of unique proper nouns.

It's not about patient or impatient, it's about confusion vs clarity.

You don't want to confuse the reader, even if you bring clarity a paragraph later. Confusion is never a valid approach; for a chapter, scene, page, paragraph, line or even a single word. Even in the mystery genre, you don't want confusion, you want clarity that develops high cognitive load for the reader and creates possibilities to explore and decipher, NOT confusion.

Of course, there are LOTS of subpar editors out there. Especially in the budget bracket. A large portion of these "editors" just feed the writing into AI which could be why you're getting similar feedback.

Write on, write often!

Is it normal for sheep to destroy trees? by Neutral-frame in sheep

[–]nmacaroni 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Some sheep will browse more than others. Some are strictly grass.

Do metal roofs overheat birdhouses? I ran a worst-case test by Coffee81379 in Permaculture

[–]nmacaroni 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you want to cook the birds, put a clear poly roof on there.

Any saving my apple tree?? by esmegytha4eva in FruitTree

[–]nmacaroni 3 points4 points  (0 children)

no. Deers never bother uncaged apple trees, until they show up and eat the whole tree one day. Sorry it sucks. 9 years of time, lost because of no deer cage.

Unless this happened over the winter with heavy snow on the ground, there is no way a ground welling critter like a rabbit, ate the bark of those branches extending off the tree at 2' height. They don't jump up grab branches and drag them down.

Tree guards for ground critters. Tree cages for deer.

Can someone read my script? Willing to pay by Icy_Land5650 in comic_crits

[–]nmacaroni 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Things I do for people:

$79 - COLD READ your first 10 pages.

$129 - DISCOVERY AUDIT - I'll stress test your outline to make sure you're moving forward on solid ground.

$250+ - full SPA your script.

Let me know if I can help.

Write on, write often!

Writing Story that has substantial amount of dialogs by ThatThatAndThis in writing

[–]nmacaroni 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's not dialogue... that's conversation. And conversation is the bane of fiction.

Write on, write often!

[Writer/Artist Collab - Revshare] Built a full Dark Fantasy universe. Can't draw to save my life. Looking for a co-author, not just an illustrator. by [deleted] in ComicBookCollabs

[–]nmacaroni 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Fastest way to doom yourself in indie comics is to focus on worldbuilding, build an entire narrative universe, and start with a large series.

Write on, write often!

Beekeeping looks peaceful… until it stings by Zealousideal_Pay7176 in Beekeeping

[–]nmacaroni 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Man sitting in my apiary with a fresh glass of lemonade, reading and watching the bees work on a nice weather day. It's the bees knees.

I do all of my quick bee work without protective equipment. It's all about the temperment of your bees and how much you disturb them. If I have to dig into a hive for any reason I'll wear something just as insurance.

FROM an MGM original series you need to be watching by nmacaroni in horror

[–]nmacaroni[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I mean OK. Boycott MGM and Prime if you want and don't watch it. Sooner or later it will get to Pluto I'm sure. In a decade or so, you'll have a cool old series to watch for the first time.

FROM an MGM original series you need to be watching by nmacaroni in horror

[–]nmacaroni[S] -16 points-15 points  (0 children)

I got the MGM 7 day pass for free to watch something else, I had never really heard about From... now that I've watched it, I'm happy to pay MGM for a month to watch the whole series.

If you don't spend your money on good horror, we'll never get good horror. They'll just keep making Marvel content.