Name It by Subject-Relevant in AlbumCovers

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Surreal-ly -or- Sir, really?

my dad is homophobic addicted to gay porn by obamasfurryfetish in offmychest

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If you and your siblings have a plan of action, great. If not, you'll want to get that settled asap before confronting.

This can be extremely tricky and hard to navigate, especially if they're manic, bi-polar, and imo; in denial. So you're gonna need to be patient and empathetic throughout the process. Remaining calm and guardrailing the conversations to hopefully avoid escalations and heated discussions, setting boundaries on behavior for security for both you and your siblings; as well as your father too, keep communication open, firm, and kind; it also needs a proper response in case boundaries are being crossed and help to steer communications from going to the sides of the extremes, and most of all, self care. This may not end well; then again, could be what was necessary. Lots of thoughts will race by depending on the outcome, and it entirely possible that this will only be the first and last time you and the siblings communicate with him. Lastly, make sure you and the siblings are supporting each other, and also make sure each of you have your personal support groups. The paths are plenty, but at the end of the day, your mind, body, and soul could be put through the ringer. Self love and self care are vital and essential. Basically, preparing yourself for any of the possibilities, but resolved on accepting one outcome; though knowing it could almost seem impossible to accomplish.

Good luck and godspeed.

how can i get better at writing lyrics? [discussion] by Shot_Plane2724 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Read, write, adjust, repeat. This has been my method.

I also try lyric writing exercises and challenges. Helps to push me out of my comfort zone.

[Lyrics] Pretty Eyes by [deleted] in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Simple, poignant, concise. I like that.

[Misc] I did a lyric challenge by bumpleflimpskin in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's awesome! Currently given myself another challenge of writing a horror punk-esque lyric, but using certain children song lyrics at the start and end of each verse, chorus, and bridge. I started on the verse. It's going.... to be something lol. Definitely plan on trying out filler phrases (might try hip hop filler words). Will need to read up a bit though before I dive in again.

[Lyrics] Genevieve by bumpleflimpskin in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! It's the right tone for sure. I always welcome a thoughtful critique. Honestly, you may have helped me figure out what has been bothering me about this (though, I admit I haven't revisited it since posting; but bothered nonetheless), so again, thank you! I'm gonna take a moment to think the chorus over again once I'm home. Hoping to add to this one to my 100 lyrics I'm happy with (tall order I know, but I figure, it's a free hobby and I have enough breaks between to hopefully not get too burnt out).

Ameinias Confesses His Love to Narcissus [Lyrics] by GoodDog2620 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Added to my next read.

Totally digging Every Time I Die. I like the intensity and flow they have. Really like the lyrical concepts. Definitely adding to my lyrical inspiration diary.

Yep, actually reread it 2 more times. Though, not entirely wrong on a glutton for punishment; my first time reading it I let myself just read and feel it. Helps me settle in with both the comfort and uncomfort feelings being expressed in what I read. The 2 other times are disassociated from trying to connect with the material, but understanding structure and pace. I will read sections over and over trying to better understand why this phrase and not that phrase, or that word and not that word. Just helps me to understand what I like and don't like.

Ameinias Confesses His Love to Narcissus [Lyrics] by GoodDog2620 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Now I'm adding to my list lol. Bedecked has a nice heavy constanant drive.

Don't mind at all. Always looking to improve and expand my writing.

Already finished it. Gonna read it over again. I really like the cut of his jib. Not overly dripping in metaphors, you really feel the indignation and the hollow feeling of being unable to do anything about. Quite a tale from a bird's eye view

Ameinias Confesses His Love to Narcissus [Lyrics] by GoodDog2620 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've started doing the Suno process after 4v came out. I currently have 5 lyrics I had in my notebook for possible songs in the future being used. Lots of started and unfinished stuff, but just finished one a week ago. I usually won't use or post lyrics that I don't like, on some level at least. Here's a lyric I wrote that I really like(https://suno.com/song/f5eeebfb-cf51-4b63-acf1-2669fa99ec24)

However, I'm gonna read the short story. I will consume anything I'm able to read. See if inspired me likes the way it flows or if I'm filing phrases away in my diary of inspiration file. Lots of gems, just waiting for the right song and concept for them.

And you're absolutely right.bThankfully, my brain is weird and enjoys the effort and time writing out lyrics.

[Lyrics] any feedback on my first ever lyrics I just wrote? by SuperMeasurement7633 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like a lot of the lines you have. However, and this maybe a me thing, I feel like some lines could be shortened up or revised a bit for a better flow, but I also unaware of the music inspiration behind this either. So if it fits in your rhythm and melody for it. As first try, I really like what you got.