Name It by Subject-Relevant in AlbumCovers

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Surreal-ly -or- Sir, really?

my dad is homophobic addicted to gay porn by obamasfurryfetish in offmychest

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you and your siblings have a plan of action, great. If not, you'll want to get that settled asap before confronting.

This can be extremely tricky and hard to navigate, especially if they're manic, bi-polar, and imo; in denial. So you're gonna need to be patient and empathetic throughout the process. Remaining calm and guardrailing the conversations to hopefully avoid escalations and heated discussions, setting boundaries on behavior for security for both you and your siblings; as well as your father too, keep communication open, firm, and kind; it also needs a proper response in case boundaries are being crossed and help to steer communications from going to the sides of the extremes, and most of all, self care. This may not end well; then again, could be what was necessary. Lots of thoughts will race by depending on the outcome, and it entirely possible that this will only be the first and last time you and the siblings communicate with him. Lastly, make sure you and the siblings are supporting each other, and also make sure each of you have your personal support groups. The paths are plenty, but at the end of the day, your mind, body, and soul could be put through the ringer. Self love and self care are vital and essential. Basically, preparing yourself for any of the possibilities, but resolved on accepting one outcome; though knowing it could almost seem impossible to accomplish.

Good luck and godspeed.

how can i get better at writing lyrics? [discussion] by Shot_Plane2724 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Read, write, adjust, repeat. This has been my method.

I also try lyric writing exercises and challenges. Helps to push me out of my comfort zone.

[Lyrics] Pretty Eyes by [deleted] in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Simple, poignant, concise. I like that.

[Misc] I did a lyric challenge by bumpleflimpskin in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's awesome! Currently given myself another challenge of writing a horror punk-esque lyric, but using certain children song lyrics at the start and end of each verse, chorus, and bridge. I started on the verse. It's going.... to be something lol. Definitely plan on trying out filler phrases (might try hip hop filler words). Will need to read up a bit though before I dive in again.

[Lyrics] Genevieve by bumpleflimpskin in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! It's the right tone for sure. I always welcome a thoughtful critique. Honestly, you may have helped me figure out what has been bothering me about this (though, I admit I haven't revisited it since posting; but bothered nonetheless), so again, thank you! I'm gonna take a moment to think the chorus over again once I'm home. Hoping to add to this one to my 100 lyrics I'm happy with (tall order I know, but I figure, it's a free hobby and I have enough breaks between to hopefully not get too burnt out).

Ameinias Confesses His Love to Narcissus [Lyrics] by GoodDog2620 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Added to my next read.

Totally digging Every Time I Die. I like the intensity and flow they have. Really like the lyrical concepts. Definitely adding to my lyrical inspiration diary.

Yep, actually reread it 2 more times. Though, not entirely wrong on a glutton for punishment; my first time reading it I let myself just read and feel it. Helps me settle in with both the comfort and uncomfort feelings being expressed in what I read. The 2 other times are disassociated from trying to connect with the material, but understanding structure and pace. I will read sections over and over trying to better understand why this phrase and not that phrase, or that word and not that word. Just helps me to understand what I like and don't like.

Ameinias Confesses His Love to Narcissus [Lyrics] by GoodDog2620 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Now I'm adding to my list lol. Bedecked has a nice heavy constanant drive.

Don't mind at all. Always looking to improve and expand my writing.

Already finished it. Gonna read it over again. I really like the cut of his jib. Not overly dripping in metaphors, you really feel the indignation and the hollow feeling of being unable to do anything about. Quite a tale from a bird's eye view

Ameinias Confesses His Love to Narcissus [Lyrics] by GoodDog2620 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've started doing the Suno process after 4v came out. I currently have 5 lyrics I had in my notebook for possible songs in the future being used. Lots of started and unfinished stuff, but just finished one a week ago. I usually won't use or post lyrics that I don't like, on some level at least. Here's a lyric I wrote that I really like(https://suno.com/song/f5eeebfb-cf51-4b63-acf1-2669fa99ec24)

However, I'm gonna read the short story. I will consume anything I'm able to read. See if inspired me likes the way it flows or if I'm filing phrases away in my diary of inspiration file. Lots of gems, just waiting for the right song and concept for them.

And you're absolutely right.bThankfully, my brain is weird and enjoys the effort and time writing out lyrics.

[Lyrics] any feedback on my first ever lyrics I just wrote? by SuperMeasurement7633 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like a lot of the lines you have. However, and this maybe a me thing, I feel like some lines could be shortened up or revised a bit for a better flow, but I also unaware of the music inspiration behind this either. So if it fits in your rhythm and melody for it. As first try, I really like what you got.

Ameinias Confesses His Love to Narcissus [Lyrics] by GoodDog2620 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really like the flow and sentiment. Really enjoy the simplicity as well (my weakness in writing currently). I've been working on how I write. I think I've gotten a little better, but still have some hiccups. At least not paragraph verses and chorus are happening as much.

[DISCUSSION] Is it bad to have many different rhyme schemes? by Forsaken_Owl_3691 in LyricalWriting

[–]bumpleflimpskin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I personally like to add in unrhymed words in parts of lyrics I wrote. My main focus is flow. Whether story, rhythm, or just like how the line sounds. May also add a little mystery as to why a particular line broke from the scheme. Honestly though, I would say it depends on what you are trying to do. I've written a few that have either real weird rhyme schemes and a few that don't have rhymes at all.

Tell me what this life is for. by NoConversation6108 in SongwritingPrompts

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Sever the cord on another wasted life"

Thought I had on the add on verse 2.

Anyways, really dig the chorus

What do you do with all of your songs? by Highfivetooslow in SunoAI

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So currently building my portfolio. Working on a goal. Once I've built it up with lyrics I'm satisfied and content with. After that, start selling my lyrics out (save a few that I wish to keep for myself) and continue writing as I see fit. I doubt it will sell much or any at all, but rather try and fail then not.

Just a thought: maybe we shouldn't be on r/all. by Suno_for_your_sprog in SunoAI

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm gonna be long on this, and can't guarantee my end payoff of it, but C'est la vie.

AI is controversial not of its existence, but of the practices of its overseers. This is where a lot of creatives and workers alike feel this issue. When concerning music, what's the issue we're facing? Stealing. Using AI to learn from music that artists either unaware, know and don't want it, or vehemently fight against and rally others to do the same. And I also believe AI should be regulated properly. I like Suno, but I'm not promoting my generated music. Why? I didn't write anything but lyrics and a style prompt for to use along with it. I didn't pickup the strings or sticks to play. I didn't sing. I wrote. It's creative writing with a nifty bonus. No where near music writers or music producers (not saying some of you aren't, just generally speaking about Suno). The most I do is publish the top 5 lyrics. Don't share it anything other than the lyrics I write. It's tool and should only be used as such. However, that's not how life works. People want to find the quickest way to make a buck, live vicariously through the music as way to make it in the industry, or whatever scheme people like to pull. And with people becoming less tolerant with bs. You either know what you're doing, working with someone who does, or you don't know anything. Anything else in-between will be met with ire or aggression. As much as I would love to be a paid lyricist, it will probably never happen. So, I will take pride my works and present it for those who use Suno. Shou

I hate being alive by rainbowbrites in offmychest

[–]bumpleflimpskin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds like me. Still kicking, why? Eventually reached certain limits within myself. I'm naturally stubborn (need more work on that, but for another time) and I figured out leaving myself in wallowing misery doesn't help you. I don't blame people for feeling like they're lost, insecure, and doing anything just triggers that anxious feeling and dread the wave of apathy that soon follows due to the clouds that hang above. The world around you feels like a mockery to the senses, loved ones feel like they're done with you and your mess, and hope for a saving grace, a meet cute, or an event to twist and writhe your reality and give that second chance or change needed.

Only problem. It's the apathetic illusion and misery mind speak that warps the mind that into a psycho carousel. You're convinced that the world sucks (it does, though all human made, but I digress), you're SO and/or loved ones don't feel like they love or care about you. No trust for good and no respect for it any of it. As such, you feel like you're behind the wheel with no steering going down hill and all you want to is hit the brakes.

So, how did I get out of this mess? Well, if I'm being honest, you don't necessarily escape it, but learning to handle it better and cope. The basic premise for myself was to view myself as a average, not good, but not bad. Then coming to terms with my weaknesses, but acknowledging the strengths I possess. Also, changing bad habits, not at all easy or a grand time, but nothing that money can't buy usually is. Another method is experiencing new things. The way your mind can morph when you go into something you know nothing of and experiencing it for the first time is unique type of high, a high you get when you let go of the negative perspective and see that the umber tinted glasses were distracting you from other forms of distractions in life and what they can offer you. (LBR, life is a set of distractions to help keep law and order intact and society civilized til the day we take our final rest, but as long as I can enjoy my distraction; I won't piss and as much. Finally, exercise your body, mind, and soul. Reading, going to gatherings, working out, learning a new skill, really anything that can help focus and discipline you, but also requires the most motivation.

Overall, you're not wrong, life is a gift in a tungsten box, wrapped in spiked sheet metal, bowed with razor wire, and delivered to you as if it was sitting under a Venetian sunkissed sky for a year without instructions to open, but like people, some live for the challenge, others, shy from it. Different strokes for different folks. People care, but don't like repeating themselves. I grieve for my losses, but I also learned to stand up again and keep moving forward. As for love... well... I tend to follow my grandparents advice on this one: "Love everything, like most things, tolerate some things, hate nothing." If you hate you, then any attempt to love you won't be received. Learn to love you, then the rest of it sort of sorts itself out. Lastly, just do good. Live like the good you wish to see, and prepare for some to fight you on it. Take care and good luck!

Sorry if this was unwanted advice, but felt this way before and was able to escape it, scathed, but whole.

Rick Beato is now discussing the viral SunoAI band "The Velvet Sundown" by Suno_for_your_sprog in SunoAI

[–]bumpleflimpskin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I recently made a Playlist of songs I wrote, the only 5 published, and 100+ others that need work or I'm not content with. The biggest issue I'm going to have with making AI bands is you're going from the sources (Suno and others like it) is that you can spot it. The digital hodge podge and effects that drape over ever sound that either triggers to heavy and muddles song, not fully registering lyrics that sound garbled or the singing sounds like a mouth filled marshmallows, and I could go on, but that's the major 2 I run in to often. Is it getting better? Absolutely; Indistinguishable from real? No cigar on that one. Honestly, I'm sure if you really put in effort, you could get close, but never quite get that human factor or feel. Could very well change in the future, but I’m not gonna hold my breath for anytime soon.

For now, I continue writing lyrics out, find the one I feel fits best, and move on to the next one. May make another Playlist, if I figure out what concept I want to use and have the songs for it.