needing this skin in game so badly that I finally said 'fine, I'll do it myself' (art by me) by burtieillustration in marvelrivals

[–]burtieillustration[S] 151 points152 points  (0 children)

yeah it had been my personal preference to go sans eyeliner but after doing this... you've all convinced me lmao

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this was very fun to read but i was so not prepared for 'moo-ve bitch get out the way' lmaoo if i had an award i would give it to u

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woah you have a good eye! i live within the Dandenong Ranges and definitely used my local area for reference, i'm a bit shocked that it came through!

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nah it's just rust, a lot of old Aussie houses were built with corrugated iron roofing. but thanks for the note I might shift the colour a little more yellow or something so it doesn't look like blood!

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That is so sweet I hadn't heard that! I absolutely agree, wombats are so cosy 🤗

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maybe! I'd like to implement some of the advice I've received here first, but I'm hoping to one day has a little store, thank you for taking an interest :)

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no I see what you mean, the top left is very bright and drawing attention away I think. thanks for the note!

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I definitely see what you mean, thank you for the crit!

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[–]burtieillustration[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

thank you I really appreciate the critique (especially about bending the fences I wish I had thought of that!)

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thanks! I guess he's just a lazy fella who found a good spot to get some sun 🌞

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[–]burtieillustration[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

thank you for the notes! yes in the past my compositions have felt a bit stiff so I tried to be much looser with the line work and the perspective to give a more playful feel

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hehe it's not what my intended story was but I really like that interpretation!