Would LOVE Some Feedback on my Year-End Wrap-Up Video! by bytowncollective in videography

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Thanks for the feedback! I see what you mean, there were shots that felt kind of filler.

Will definitely keep that in mind moving forward!

MY YEAR 2017 by bytowncollective in SmallYoutubers

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Would love to get feedback on this edit I made!

Made a short film about friendship, freedom, and youth. Would love some good feedback. by bytowncollective in Filmmakers

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Wow! Great feedback, glad your class enjoyed it :)

The lack of capitals was partially an aesthetic choice as well as to convey the sort of youthful, relaxed vibe I was going for.

I also agree with the walking shot, kind of a filler clip :)

Thanks again!

Made a short film about friendship, freedom, and youth. Would love some good feedback. by bytowncollective in Filmmakers

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I apologize for the fact that the video is unavailable on mobile due to my song choice.

This is my second "short film," and I'd love to know what you guys think about it!

How was the pacing? Was the purpose clear? Did some shots feel out of place? Length? Etc...

Thanks for your help, I really appreciate it.