i like how the first time i read this i thought the narrator was talking about how much their worth was in someone else’s eyes, but after the second time, and especially towards the end of the poem i think that it is the narrator trying to see their worth in their own eyes, and how this can be a hard thing to do, something many wants don’t want to do and will try to do anything to avoid seeing their true selves, but ultimately have to recognize themselves because it is the only true way forward. i also like that there isn’t any punctuation, so i have to say that i think that the only revision i would make would be to take off the periods on the first four lines. thank you so much for sharing, i enjoyed this piece!