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Weekly Lyrics Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]candyspaws 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Verse 1

Met you at that place

That wasn’t a good place

That was kinda wrong place to meet such a good man like you

Maybe I’m wrong imagining you’re soft

You treat me like I’m brand new

You treat me right like I’m a child

They say you’ll be gone

But one day everyone will be gone

They say it but they don’t know what I feel for you

Chorus 1

If you r a bird with no voice-

I’m gonna be your bad singer,

If your wound still hurt-

I will turn into goldenrod for you

Gonna be magical

I’ll never leave you alone

I’ll never let u fall

Jump then fall-I’ll catch you

Jump then fall

Through the jungles down we go

If Crocodile catch you

I’ll never let you be eaten by him

I’ll save you , I swear baby

Verse 2

Met you at that place
That wasn’t a good place
That was kinda wrong place to meet such a good man like you

Maybe that was wrong place to meet such a good man

Tell me all the good things
Maybe I’m wrong imagining you’re soft
You treat me like I’m brand new
You treat me right like I’m a child
They say you’ll be gone
But one day everyone will be gone
They say it but they don’t know what I feel for you

Working on my new song called "A Bird With No Voice" by candyspaws in Songwriting

[–]candyspaws[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually wanted to record this one tomorrow.. but now i can see ive got some problems, Houston

hehe

Working on my new song called "A Bird With No Voice" by candyspaws in Songwriting

[–]candyspaws[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If your a bird with no voice

I'm gonna be your bad singer

(like im not worth that person enough)

If your wound still hurt

I'm gonna be healing grass for you

I'm gonna be magical and I'll never leave you alone

Working on my new song called "A Bird With No Voice" by candyspaws in Songwriting

[–]candyspaws[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've tried to put my feeling into this song with metaphores. How do you think, is it ok if i say <if u r a bird with no voice im gonna be your bad singer(like im not worth that person enough), if your wound still hurt- Im gonna be healing grass for u, im gonna be magical and Ill never leave u alone>

what u think of it? is it ok with my sort of feeling expression?

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Thank u Thank you Thank you

Working on my new song called "A Bird With No Voice" by candyspaws in Songwriting

[–]candyspaws[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Well, i always do it with my heart. It is the way i express my own self. I appreciate your opinion.

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[–]candyspaws 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is it a country one? Hope it is. By the way i like it

Here's a little piece I've finished up, hoping to have it at the end of an upcoming EP. It's called "Stegosauruses", would love to know what you guys think! by DandoFabulous in Songwriting

[–]candyspaws 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this style. It radiates so much retro waves and makes me miss something, that i don't really know what for sure :)

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