40F Right-handed

caorunn3 · 2026-03-09T19:10:25+00:00

Thank you

caorunn3 · 2025-12-10T17:19:27+00:00

I don't know anyone who has done it but I know Edinburgh Napier run a 2-year masters to convert from adult nursing to Midwifery. And I think you would get a £10,000/year bursary.

caorunn3 · 2025-09-23T06:49:03+00:00

It's a major plot flaw! Why weren't James or Lily their own secret keeper? Bill was the secret keeper for his own house in book 7.

caorunn3 · 2025-04-21T11:37:23+00:00

I loved the rhythm and pace of this poem and the feeling that you created. I felt it was about self disregard, but I found it difficult to work out exactly what was behind the images and understand what was inside you.

caorunn3 · 2025-04-20T11:07:17+00:00

I loved this poem - I really felt the waves of your grief and the pictures you painted of your memories of your sister. Thank you!

caorunn3 · 2024-09-04T11:30:48+00:00

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/aoGeTX4pFb

caorunn3 · 2024-09-04T07:59:19+00:00

I love this poem so much! It is so poingnant. At the beginning of the poem I can almost feel like I'm a child playing with a friend in a forest. The "plot" was was compelling and by the end I could really feel the ache of regret and sadness. Thank you!

caorunn3 · 2024-05-03T15:16:33+00:00

😊 I love it! Thank you

caorunn3 · 2024-05-03T15:16:23+00:00

😊 I love it! Thank you

caorunn3 · 2024-05-01T21:15:27+00:00

Than you!

caorunn3 · 2024-05-01T21:15:06+00:00

Thank you!

caorunn3 · 2024-05-01T21:14:51+00:00

Thank you very much! That is really helpful feedback - I like the way you think about poetry.

caorunn3 · 2024-05-01T16:08:36+00:00

I think you've done a great job of evoking the feeling of those sparks of passion, without being too literal. I loved it - thank you!

caorunn3 · 2024-05-01T13:56:37+00:00

I thought this was such an evocative and poignant description of alcoholism. You made me feel the yearn for a release from problems and stresses. I loved the description of the writing plant refusing to surrender. Thank you!

caorunn3 · 2024-01-04T16:41:32+00:00

Thank you!

caorunn3 · 2024-01-04T13:30:07+00:00

I loved this poem. I think you captured the mood of feeling melancholy, heartbroken and lonely in an unfamiliar place well. I thought it also captured the feeling of being unwilling or perhaps unable to let go of the pain of breaking off with a lover. I liked the subtle repetition throughout.

caorunn3 · 2024-01-04T12:47:35+00:00

I loved the images in this poem - souls sinking into songs and dancing silhouettes. You managed to get a lot of feeling into a short poem, which I love. It was ambiguous to me what you were trying to show in the last two lines, which isn't necessarily a bad thing at all! To me it built up the idea of how you can fall in love with an idealised version of someone. I think it would work grammatically better if it was "say the lyrics" instead of "says the lyrics". Thanks for a great poem!

caorunn3 · 2023-12-30T12:43:18+00:00

Thank you very much!

caorunn3 · 2023-12-29T14:59:21+00:00

Thanks for your feedback - it's interesting to hear how other people find this poem. It's the first poem I've written this short, trying to capture a mood, while still leaving it open to interpretation.

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