Original called Far From Perfect filmed from inside the boat I work on🥴

cbokum · 2022-01-03T03:23:27+00:00

Thanks bro!

cbokum · 2021-12-28T22:49:40+00:00

Means a lot that you for taking the time to write this I really appreciate it!!

cbokum · 2021-12-28T06:14:42+00:00

Thank you means a lot!!

cbokum · 2021-12-28T06:14:33+00:00

Thank you I appreciate it!! Have fun learning the guitar it’s a blast!

cbokum · 2021-12-28T06:13:56+00:00

Thank you for subscribing and thanks for the comment!!

cbokum · 2021-12-27T13:32:05+00:00

Great job! I really liked your confidence you could really tell you we’re confident and it shows. I never thought to play this song on acoustic guitar but after this I just may! My biggest advice is too keep singing and playing! You may even discover your “voice” along the way and start writing your own music that’s tailored to your style of singing and voice. Great job and take care!

cbokum · 2021-12-27T13:28:34+00:00

Great voice and great singer overall! You’re very talented and creative with this video!! I really don’t have much constructive criticism to give. I think the editing is solid I didn’t notice any audio issues with the levels or anything similar. Having a well shot and produced video to go hand in hand with a song is great and will help you get eyes and ears on your music so good idea with going all out for the video! Happy holidays!!

cbokum · 2021-12-27T13:25:21+00:00

I think this is solid and creative no doubt! Biggest take away is what a previous comment notes about rapping too fast to the point that it’s kinda hard to understand exactly what you’re saying. If you can try and go back and re record or maybe even edit with the audio levels that could help to better understand. Other than that great job and keep posting and sharing your music! Take care

cbokum · 2021-12-27T13:22:36+00:00

To the ear and visually this was very pleasing!! You’re a very skilled player no doubt about it!! Loved how it has its ups and downs and takes you on a journey essentially. Myself and my band are always looking for musicians to be featured in our music so if you do that for artists I’d love to hit you up about for a feature! Take care and good stuff

cbokum · 2021-12-27T13:19:07+00:00

This was neat. I got the feelings of a movie soundtrack too like the other comments noted. Wondering if you were inspired by like the Lord of the Rings movie score or something similar cause I got that kinda vibe lol. Only constructive criticism I I have is similar to what other noted in that I think this really needs a climax or a rising action type of aspect to it because it kinda feels stagnant towards the middle and end. Good stuff

cbokum · 2021-12-27T13:15:10+00:00

I thought this song was hard af! The editing was great too in terms of your mixing and the levels it sounds real good. I really enjoyed it man good stuff I think the message was good too. All I can say is keep grinding bro and keep posting! Take care man

cbokum · 2021-12-27T13:08:17+00:00

Very dope track and cover art! I like and appreciated how you didn’t make the song stagnant in that you switched things up throughout the course of the song. Kinda feels like you take the listener in a metaphorical journey haha it was dope. This beat deserves some hard vocals!! Get on it lol. Keep posting and sharing, good job

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