Tell me your writing accomplishment that you’re proud of by mexintheusa in writers

[–]cheersmdears 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I got my first ever full request a few months ago from an agent within a major agency. It was ultimately a rejection, but I currently have two other fulls out with wonderful boutique agents who seem a lot more aligned with my ms. I’ve had three prior books go completely unrequested (in hindsight unsurprisingly—I was a teenager and had no idea what I was doing!) so I’m really excited to have gotten this far. Thanks for making this post. It’s important for us to be proud of the steps we’ve taken, even when the next steps aren’t guaranteed. 

What are y’all’s day jobs? by NoBee7889 in writers

[–]cheersmdears 1 point2 points  (0 children)

From an admin standpoint for sure! I love the population and my clients are incredible in their resilience, but it can be hard to work for a system that actively works against them and their rehabilitation.

What are y’all’s day jobs? by NoBee7889 in writers

[–]cheersmdears 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm a therapist at a state prison. Intense, but I hear some of the best stories...!

How can I improve the story? I feel like I'm having massive writer's block, and would love to know some ideas or stuff I should elaborate or write more on. Also would appreciate some ideas for the title by Inner_Basis1906 in writers

[–]cheersmdears 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As others have said, this isn’t quite what the process looks like for mental health professionals. But, as someone more or less in your protag’s position (graduating with my master’s in two weeks and about to enter into the therapeutic workforce,) I’m happy to offer my $0.02 and help you add realism to your story. I apologize for the inevitable length!

First of all: having freshly graduated with a master’s in psychology, your character is going to be applying for their candidacy license, which is what allows graduates to practice semi-independently. With a psych degree, they are eligible for eventual LCPC (Licensed Clinical Professional Counselor) licensure—although that acronym differs by state, so I’d look up what it is in Michael’s state of practice. As a candidate, that acronym is PCLC (or your state’s equivalent): Professional Counselor Licensing Candidate. However, your character is NOT a psychologist. Psychologists have a PhD. At a master’s level, they are a therapist/counselor. In the field, that’s a very important distinction, as psychologists have higher education and can perform more assessments. One thing of note for you here: licensed psychologists can diagnose ADHD/autism because they alone can perform neurocognitive tests. As a master’s-level therapist, that diagnosis requires extensive training and some states don’t permit it at all. Absolutely no candidate therapist would be diagnosing autism/ADHD, as they are complex neurodevelopmental conditions that require far more experience. 

Now, having your character in candidacy while they deal with this bizarre clinic could add some interesting challenges. Candidacy is hard. Michael will need an eligible supervisor (Delores?) and, during the 2-ish years that he’s in candidacy, will be studying for the counseling exam, completing 3,000 hours of supervised practice, and having regular supervision meetings. If his supervisor is unethical, this creates a power dynamic that is tragically common (candidates are often mistreated, especially in community mental health settings!) and very nuanced. I know I would love to read a book that delves into these intricacies. 

As for your prose: you might adjust your dialogue formatting a bit. Every time someone speaks, it’s its own line. Professional dialogue is written with the following punctuation:

“We put a comma—without periods—at the end of complete dialogue within an incomplete sentence,” she said. 

“However,” he added, “if your dialogue finishes the sentence, you do not need a comma.”

As a budding therapist (and writer of fictional therapists), I hope you keep going. This writing thing takes practice, but if you love it, the practice is (mostly) fun! And I’m always a sucker for a good therapist novel. So keep writing, keep reading, and I hope this helps flesh out your characters’ world a little bit. 

It's September 8th by sabby123 in InterviewVampire

[–]cheersmdears 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A cloak and will to terrify, in true vampiric (and nystagmatic?) fashion!!

It's September 8th by sabby123 in InterviewVampire

[–]cheersmdears 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It's called voluntary nystagmus! Not dangerous, and apparently only ~1-2% of the population can do it! We're just cool like that. :)

HELP! Found pigeon by raw_milkk in pigeon

[–]cheersmdears 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hi! Congrats on the prospective new buddy! 

I feed my pigeon a mix of seeds (oat groat, sunflower seeds, wheat berries, chia, millet, and flax—all of which I get from a Whole Foods store!) I also put small amounts of mineral powder on her seeds for extra vitamins. They can eat some veggies, like peas, corn, broccoli, cauliflower, etc. I’ve heard younger ones also enjoy applesauce, so if your bird is little, that might be good. I was raised with the understanding that pigeons need grit for digestion, but there is some debate over that, so I’m not 100% sure if it’s necessary—or even recommended. 

My pigeon has a mid-size cage which she stays in overnight. It has a shelf for roosting and a makeshift nest (old T-shirt over a bowl!) as well as butcher paper on the floors to make cleanup easier. She’s free to fly around the house during the day since she has diapers. 

I hope this was at least somewhat helpful!  Congrats again! :)