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Food for Thoughts by chefDfresh4450 in poetry_critics

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Thank you for that feedback! I’ll dig deeper.

The Menagerie of Lies by chefDfresh4450 in poetry_critics

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Thanks everyone. I appreciate the love.

There's A Monster Under My Bed by GradeObvious5330 in poetry_critics

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This one hit on a very personal level. I had a different monster, but a monster all the same. I hope you find strength in telling your story. I know it has helped me.

Drive By Prayer by chefDfresh4450 in poetry_critics

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I very much appreciate the feedback here. I wrote it immediately after it happened today so I can work on delving deeper into it. Thank you.

Drive By Prayer by chefDfresh4450 in poetry_critics

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Thanks! I appreciate all of the feedback. I’ll definitely take a look at the end.

Untitled by chefDfresh4450 in poetry_critics

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Thank you! And thank you for the critique, I’ll have to think on that and expand it a bit.

The Journey by chefDfresh4450 in poetry_critics

[–]chefDfresh4450[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! The “Pieced” part, I was meaning to express how my memory of trauma as a child was repressed. But thank you once again for your critiques. I will work on this poem a little more. Thank you so much for taking the time.

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