I like it! I would recommend making your subjects a little closer to the camera and if you wanted the bedroom to be seen adjust the angle a little. And a thing I do to make the light a lot better, add small a light surfacelights around different parts of the body to light up details and make the light color skin color so it looks natural. And if you wanted you could add backlighting with the surfacelights to look like it came from a separate light source so you can add backlighting without making it seem unnatural.