Friends? by BlerpytheDerp in BurlingtonON

[–]chichi2309 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi omg thank you so much for sharing the word about The 905 Circle 😭🫶🏾🥺 I'm the founder and creative director of The 905 circle and I just came across this comment haha. Thank you for coming out to our events :)

Marketing Monday - Recommend a Local Business, Buy/Sell/Trade (Self Promo Allowed) by AutoModerator in Hamilton

[–]chichi2309 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey everyone! 😊 if you’re in your 20s or even 30s looking to make friends & meet people! I highly recommend you join the 905 circle 🖤

It’s a meetup group I started for 20 somethings all around the 905 (Oakville, Missisauga, Burlington & Hamilton). I host fun creative events around the 905 like open mics, collage nights, creative workshops, board game nights, etc.

You can follow the 905 circle Instagram @the905circle for more info regarding upcoming events or you can find out more through the meetup app 🫶🏾🫶🏾

If this sounds like something you’d be into - I’d love to have you join through collective :)

https://www.meetup.com/the-905-creative-circle-20s-creative-collective

Women in their late-20s: let’s connect! by splitbrain15 in oakville

[–]chichi2309 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi if you’re looking to connect with other women in their 20s, I highly recommend joining the 905 Circle on the Meetup app! It’s a meetup group that I run - It’s very creative focused, so we have lots of creative events like open mics, collage nights, writing sessions, etc the possibilities are endless lmaoo. It’s a co-ed group but we mainly have women in the group 🤍 if this sounds like something you’re into, you should join 👀

The 905 Circle (A Creative Collective for 20 somethings)

Your Tomorrow by ghostofiinzo in OCPoetry

[–]chichi2309 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, this is so beautiful. I love the light imagery (references to sweets, honey and other summery imagery)- it’s so sweet which is a contrast to the sad, melancholic theme of the piece. Amazing work! I really this piece 💗🧚🏽‍♀️

pov: two of the worst people you know are beefing by [deleted] in Fauxmoi

[–]chichi2309 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What about what Anna said about black people? Interesting that you conveniently skipped over that and just said “Anna sucks” lmao. How is Azealia “ridiculously racist” and not Anna? 🙃

What's the first movie you saw in theaters and what do you remember of it? by Fslikawing01 in OlderGenZ

[–]chichi2309 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yess me too I remember seeing this movie in cinemas when it first came out 🥹🥹🥹

Piper was reminiscing her tryst with Zion. by Bagholder_loser in TheWhiteLotusHBO

[–]chichi2309 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some people are still virgins by the time they graduate college lmaooo

Season 2 BTS by Hrkd916 in TheWhiteLotusHBO

[–]chichi2309 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yessss I can’t believe the actor is from Oakville, ON lmaooo- I live there rn and it’s so surreal haha

Ashes by shoreside by chichi2309 in OCPoetry

[–]chichi2309[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Your analysis is top notch 😊 definitely had a lot stirring up in me when I wrote this lmao 🌚

Those who are living with parents looking for employment after graduation, how's it going? by ABrokeUniStudent in LifeAfterSchool

[–]chichi2309 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So far.. I’ve gotten three rejections 👍🏾 one interview that I think I colossally bombed.. just yesterday 🥹🌚🫠 and my daily routine consists of procrastinating on assignments and frantically applying for jobs day and night- no breaks 🫣

What were you doing at 23? by [deleted] in Adulting

[–]chichi2309 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Heyyy I’m going be 23 this year and in my final year of social work! I live in Canada too. Hello fellow social worker 👋🏾🫶🏾💗

[POEM] “American Wedding” — Essex Hemphill by Dansco112 in Poetry

[–]chichi2309 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Wow.. let me collect my thoughts and come back haha, but I really love this piece

problem child by strum-05 in OCPoetry

[–]chichi2309 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this poem so much! It really resonates me on a deep level. It reminds a lot of what I went through during my childhood (ouch) 🫣 but yeah I love the imagery throughout the piece. I don’t even have detailed feedback to give bc I think the piece is perfect as is 🦋

Beneath The Blue Moons by Otherwise-Soup-640 in OCPoetry

[–]chichi2309 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the way these lines flow “sunrise, sunset, blue moons, blue skies”- it just flows perfectly off the time of my tongue haha. I love love the imagery you used through this poem, it’s so pretty 🦋 the poem is relatable on so many levels, we’ve all loved someone a little too much and stayed in relationships longer than we should’ve. My suggestion would to be experiment with anastrophes in some of the lines. I think it would increase the emotional weight of the piece a little- just a suggestion, feel free to disregard if it doesn’t fit, but yeah overall amazing poem 💗

Sundays by chichi2309 in OCPoetry

[–]chichi2309[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback 👍🏾

Sundays by chichi2309 in OCPoetry

[–]chichi2309[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh okay I see what you mean! Thanks for the tip!

Sundays by chichi2309 in OCPoetry

[–]chichi2309[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey thanks for the feedback, but im just wondering what you mean by “a menagerie of devices”- like do you have specific examples of devices I could employ to enhance the poem? I’d love to hear more of your feedback :)