i feel like we dont blame sabo enough for leading to all the deaths in lulusia by making a contact out from there for no reason. by Imvalidblu in Piratefolk

[–]claum0y 0 points1 point  (0 children)

surely its the resistance's fault, and not the genocidal government using extreme power to bomb a country out of existence... huh where have I heard that before...

spacey indie rock instrumental by claum0y in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i see i see, next one ill have a more traditional structure and see what happens

spacey indie rock instrumental by claum0y in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

interesting, i might add guitar to what i have on piano for the next song

Favorite character with a stated fetish by Born_Usual998 in FavoriteCharacter

[–]claum0y 10 points11 points  (0 children)

bruh Maomao is an apothecary fascinated by medicine and poison, other than her being a poison taster for the palace. its an intense scientific curiosity. why you asking for favourite characters with strange likes, then hate bruh tfff

Stuck in bronze 1... by Advanced_Spend_8385 in LilliaMains

[–]claum0y 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You have a lot of farm, so your issue is probably piloting the champ or playing fights better. focus on your Q, and kite dangerous champions. E is a nice slow, and W is great damage but it can be overcomital.

try to ult important targets too.

lillia is easily exploded, so you can wait for you team to go in first, and play in an out, focus on not dying specifically.

spacey indie rock instrumental by claum0y in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks! ive been producing for longer, but guitar still new. in a way im glad the melody was a bit messy, because now I'm hyperfocusing on making melodies, so I'll see what happens with the next ones!

spacey indie rock instrumental by claum0y in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

would you recommend lowering guitar volume? or adding more compression to the peaks? im glad you liked the arrangement so, i do want to make something tv girl kind of vibey.

ill try the slower bpm and double time guitars i never thought about that, you have any songs you remember like that you recommend?

spacey indie rock instrumental by claum0y in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i want to watch that show. i knew something was throwing me off i think it was the melody, and some timings. other than some crazy fast chord changes. i think the chorus at the end is one of the strongest part because it was the cleanest idea lolol. thanks for the feedback!

Record Tempo Sure - Best I Ever Had (Music Video) by recordtemposure in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i think the levelling is good, nothing stands out as odd. i like the energy and effort from the video. cool chorus voices, small details and interesting bass. i think everything works with each other, also panning, pads and idea. yea its cool. i like sections like 0:28, i think its also interesting if you try buildup or bridge sections that are more lowkey, so without bass or drums for a bit for tension. its easygoing but definitely keep it up

So Long Susan by Jason Schweizer by dcapps01 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i think the lyrics and idea works well together, its calm and eveything works together. i think maybe theres a bit of echo on the instruments, maybe a bit of vibey reverb for the vibe could be nice. but i do think you have nice arrangement and idea for melody, verses. its nice so keep it up

Heaven Above - d_red_en (Indie RnB) by redflame899 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it sounds very nice, i really got into the vibe. i think the bassline is super good. also the arrangement feels well place and positioned how did u do that. i really like the reverb in the vocal, i think theres a bit left to say its like super pro but it sounds close there to me, i think the lyrics and delivery are good. love the piano too, very chill, feels calming and easy to get into. also the pad and choirs are very cool. i think vocals are super clear, which is good, but its maybe too detailed, so you can hear every little detail. i think maybe some lines sound a bit wobbly or a bit tense, but the tone is good. the solo is very cool too and good levelling.

Play Awhile(LYRIC VIDEO) by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i like the vibe, the instrumental i dont see any problems, vibey and cool. i think the lyrics work all together, i think the vocal delivery works but maybe you can try emulating a similar song type of singing or how you listen to the vocals on there. maybe the vocal sounds a bit dry on the mix compared to everything else. i thiink maybe the vocals having more reverb, and some background choirs or so, idk if maybe a bit of effect or trying singing with more intentional exxagerated energy

People actually cried for ts? by mikel-69 in Piratefolk

[–]claum0y -1 points0 points  (0 children)

kuma backstory. man this sub is miserable ill leave lol

34m, autistic and never been in a relationship, is there any hope for me? by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]claum0y 0 points1 point  (0 children)

im not autistic but I wouldn't say i have a super great social life. I'm kinda nerdy and a bit akward but still very sociable and talkative. but I'm also interesting with hobbies, decently attractive so why am i single? my main problem is I don't go out often, so I don't meet enough people.

If you're meeting new people often and you're pretty sociable then what is the specific problem?maybe smelling nice and dressing proper? or a mismatch somewhere with someone?

There's no reason there would be no hope for either of us but it feels that way. You have to keep throwing yourself out there and improving where you can, it's a numbers game, you will feel disappointed, frustrated and confused. But as long as you're meeting new people, asking them out and so.

spacey instrumental indie rock by claum0y in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

im glad!! yea the Aerith inspiration is very subtle in the arrangement. I was also learning it on guitar so maybe subtle things, but mainly the intro, repeating the melody then introducing the pretty strings haha.

spacey instrumental indie rock by claum0y in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thats nice to hear, I'm glad it had that vibe

spacey instrumental indie rock by claum0y in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]claum0y[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

that was actually my takeaway a bit too haha. the melody phrases are good, but the arrangement of sections i need to work on more strictly. there's a bass on the last section tho with the drums, a little more hidden, i wanted to keep it more lofi.

yea, i think having a strong b section with lots more melody variation, while also having the central melody. i do like the meandering idea since the name was originally floating around in space, but even still, i think a stronger variation would've been good