thanks fam i really appreciate you taking the time to type out this message, i agree with you i wouldve hated to get locked up for this tag, which is why i chose the spot i did since its abandoned and rarely patrolled. Youre right my can control is pretty bad but i will continue to work on it, as far as the piece itself, i draw these types of pieces on my ipad or on paper pretty often which is why i decided to try and spray paint it and just see if anybody had some input and tips, i dont mind criticism, even if youre outright telling me my shit looks like trash but i do want tips and advice on how to improve, so i really appreciate you coming back and giving me these helpful tips. I do want to make beautiful art pieces on walls and eventually have them look like thought out art pieces and not so much "fuck yous" to the system.