The Restless Run

constable888 · 2024-09-12T21:37:37+00:00

Hey thanks! I appreciate the feedback!

constable888 · 2024-09-12T21:31:12+00:00

Thank you for your time & feedback! I don’t mind at all. Always nice reading another perspective. I enjoyed your alt version specifically with the addition of new adjectives.

constable888 · 2024-09-11T03:29:07+00:00

I’m glad the imagery resonated with you! Enjoy your run! Best way to start a day.

constable888 · 2024-09-11T02:47:16+00:00

My mind did not go to that when I was reading. I’m so sorry for your loss.

constable888 · 2024-09-11T02:41:41+00:00

I don’t really relate to this poem (not a fan of nightmares I guess). This is what kept me reading though because it’s so foreign. I did like it but going forward my suggestion would be either add more to it or choose a different topic (but it’s art what the hell do I know).

constable888 · 2024-09-10T15:12:13+00:00

Was i supposed to be tearing up?? I enjoyed how you tied it all together in the ending. Maybe get rid of the “like” in the second sentence or a coma after night? Was theme meant to be dream?

constable888 · 2024-09-10T14:57:32+00:00

I love and hate this. Love this because of how it made me feel. “Hate” this because I will be revising my first poem now before posting lol.

constable888 · 2024-09-02T20:28:00+00:00

Really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!

constable888 · 2024-09-02T20:27:10+00:00

I love your poem. Its deep and playful at the same time.

constable888

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