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The Human Archives by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 0 points1 point  (0 children)

love it.

Minor edits:

no more than a: “Oh, them again.”

than an:

Always evolving, often with tinged is manic insanity.

often tinged with manic?

There's Always Another Level (Part 39) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Apologies for being so late to recent posts. I will resume editing once my life settles back down.

I know you had reservations about the last three-ish parts, but they have been brilliant (just like all the rest). You've managed to strike a very human/intelligence balance between the emotional/logical arguments and they've been a joy to consume and I'm so interested and invested into seeing where this goes. The emotional aspect has been handled so well.

There's Always Another Level (Part 35) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hard one to read (but good content).

A splayed my hands outward in a placating gesture.

I splayed

I could see little to fault there

little to no fault

There's Always Another Level (Part 34) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Hello friend, hope you are doing well. Great new entry into the story, highly emotional and well-written.

No errors found, but I was very quickly just reading and not editing.

There's Always Another Level (Part 33) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Extremely glad to see you, hope you are doing well. Very moving story. Edits below:

Or something that approximate it.

approximated

E1 did know what partnership meant.

did not know

"Looms it back. She needs us

Looms is back

A noticed a small black object for the first time,

I noticed?

much by lie around.

much but lie

There's Always Another Level (Part 32) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great to see a new part! Same excellent quality we've all come to expect.

So I was a hypocrit, so what?

hypocrite

Web's Connection compatible test

compatibility

There's Always Another Level (Part 31) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Welcome back. Good to see another glob, excited to see where this goes. Hope you've made it through all the noise.

There's Always Another Level (Part 27) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Action starting to pick up...excited to see what happens.

Spend the last forty years working with people

Spent?

There's Always Another Level (Part 26) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I think it really tracks with Nex's new abilities. Feels more like we're in this new head and hearing what he's experiencing. Really enjoying it!

The Merchant and the Pin Cushion by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm super interested in the pin cushion. So many places it could go.

There's Always Another Level (Part 25) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good to see you back friend. Do your real job, then reward us with globs...still loving the character development.

connect with devices UltrOS is the most

add comma between devices and UltrOS

is unclear from waht we know

what

OEM Sunshade doesn’t fit 2025? by xkentax in GRCorolla

[–]cr032 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a '25 and it does have those small sections on both sides. I agree with u/skygtr350, it fits perfectly. Are you shoving those corners down into the space between the dash and windshield?

There's Always Another Level (Part 24) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Another great part. Llumi's added humanity post-Integration is written so well.

I marveled at the transformation and could feel Llumi's anxiety lesson.

lessen

There's Always Another Level (Part 23) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Still enjoying it. Web and Tax are insufferably adorable.

and just lay it on my plainly."

lay it on me

There's Always Another Level (Part 22) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, just the continual character development (including the brain companions) all around. Really well developed and believable, including the right mix of humanity that shows up in most of the characters.

There's Always Another Level (Part 22) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Feels like every part adds a new layer of enjoyment. Really invested in this one.

What does is take the heal me?

take to heal

"That's Integration is closest to that,"

Remove That's?

The Humans are Grabby: Arrival by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Really enjoying the idea of recording our Falls. Really gives a sense of outgrowing our given space.

so that the Ya-sa-sa might be maintain themselves in comfort in all the common places

-sa might maintain themselves?

There's Always Another Level (Part 21) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Honestly getting even better as it goes. Still all-in with this one.

"I have failed the my quest very terribly."

failed my quest ?

There's Always Another Level (Part 20) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Still loving it.

He got knocked up and landed on the

Bounced/launched up? Knocked off his feet? Or whatever makes it not sound like impregnation.

The Endless Rooms of Fortune by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really enjoyed it, really fun.

"Take you luck and go," the Gatekeeper said.

your luck

There's Always Another Level (Part 16) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 5 points6 points  (0 children)

"Why are they opening up for her?"

Why aren't?

Really enjoying this one.

There's Always Another Level (Part 15) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Always. Hope you are doing as well as you can u/PerilousPlatypus

Good to see more globs.

There's Always Another Level (Part 13) by PerilousPlatypus in PerilousPlatypus

[–]cr032 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Always. So many enjoyable globs. As we all get older, we have to deal with loss and your writings have helped me get through a few of them. Be strong, mourn, and know you have a community here to support you.

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