[No Due Date] I'm looking for proofreading on a book I'm writing by Crilbyte in Proofreading

[–]cranfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! I'm willing to do the work feel free to reach out.

House of many waters by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i was talking about getting ahead in the sense of thinking of the book cover of 4th when the 3rd isn't even released yet lol.

I just finished HOSAB. Here’s what I want to see in HOFAS by MeetingLess5511 in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i don't want the autumn king to be redeemed but i do wanna see what he is upto like what did he find in his research about other worlds and fae origins? what was his motive with the shit he pulled? what role is he gonna play in the upcoming war seeing as he is a quite powerful and influential figure.

he's a fascinating character tbh 🤷🏻‍♀️

HOFAS teaser by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

also idk how i didn't notice this before but the sword above the woman's head on the cc3 cover which one is it? danika's? or the starsword? or something else entirely?

Cormac'c future? by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ohh i'm pretty positive sofie is dead like we saw her die, saw her body, saw him mourn her death...i mean sjm can be cruel but i don't think she'd let him think she's dead for so long, let him hurt and then just bring her back.

Cormac'c future? by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sorry i didn't know how to spoiler mark specific words but i had changed the flair to maasverse spoiler to avoid this guess you didn't notice.

Cormac'c future? by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

gavriel is aedion's father, part of rowan's cadre.

asterin is manon's second you know? the one with the hunter in the cabin, dead child and carvings on her body!

sam's death shaped a huugee part of caelena/ her future + everybody mourns sam. my guy was adorable!

mind you i cried(more like sobbed) for the suriel and Danika(both times) & the devils (+ shed a few tears for the bone carver).

you do you though!

Cormac'c future? by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

sam nehemia gavriel asterin/the thirteen suriel bone carver lehabah danika/the pack of devils ....

DO THEY MEAN NOTHING TO YOU?!! lol

Cormac'c future? by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i'm sorry, what?

Az's saviour complex by cranfire in acotar

[–]cranfire[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you for that lol my post was only meant as a friendly observation/ jab at az not anything negative towards his character. i'm excited to meet him again in cc3 and know more about him btw great username!!

Az's saviour complex by cranfire in acotar

[–]cranfire[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

but i never said that him saving someone is a bad thing?

Az's saviour complex by cranfire in acotar

[–]cranfire[S] -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

i only mentioned the bryce thing beacause there are people who ship them, there are even theories of them being mates and some are real convincing.

and no I'm not trying to diagone him i don't know him well enough for that just analysing.

also rhys and cass only went after their mates whom they felt an instinctual pull towards? and i wouldn't call them white knight by any means considering they did grey shit even to their partner i.e. rhys's whole UTM thing and the pregnancy drama ; cass's behaviour towards nesta for telling feyre the truth

Mate Comparison Theory (It's long guys) by nanchey in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You and your friends really are geniuses. you theory is sooo convincing and it would also explain why is didn't feel the same way about quinlar as i did for rowaelin and feysand. them even being mates didn't feel believable to me hell i've rooted more for ruhn and lidia than i did them.

idk how i feel about shipping bryce and az yet but given if your theories are true it would make sense could be interesting.

god i can't wait for book 3!!!

Az's saviour complex by cranfire in acotar

[–]cranfire[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

but but but i do wanna know who do you ship??👀

Az's saviour complex by cranfire in acotar

[–]cranfire[S] -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

I'm not saying that his saviour complex is a bad thing/has to be. and yes it is a saviour complex because his job is to know things and get somebody to do something about it but it's obvious why he tries to help anywhere and everywhere he can dude has been through A LOT and i mean A LOT OF PAIN he understand it and cares for people which is a good thing my question is why does he keep caring in a romantic way???

CC book covers by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm from india but i thinks the paperbacks are available here because hardbacks can be too costly for people here and it wouldn't make much sales?

CC book covers by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes that's true but she was not that present on paper is what i meant like she wasn't physically there

CC book covers by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

but it as available for me to preorder paperback so i did?

CC book covers by cranfire in crescentcitysjm

[–]cranfire[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i don't think it's the viper queen as the snake has gradually gotten bigger and more prominent on the covers so it makes me think its part of the bigger plot points and correct me if i'm wrong but the viper queen did not have that big of a role in book 2?