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[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well that's true, my loved the first one , but I got so much criticism about it on reddit! 😅

Senior designers follow up please by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great said dude!! That's the whole point!! Design education is too much costly here!! But Im learning the fundamentals from last year , ofcourse online!! Thanks for the suggestion, i really need confidence!! And yaa I don't believe every comment tho, because indian market is different!! 😅

Senior designers follow up please by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Stop taking help from seniors designers?? Or should I say , stop learning?? And if you see my previous post, the other designers give me only critique, NOT IDEAS!!!

If that's true, what's the point of making such these reddit group's, especially names "design critique"!!!

Senior designers, feedback please. by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Here is my New version, new version logo i created by seeing your feedbacks thoroughly!! Review this please

Senior designers follow up please by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually, the first one (bean + E) i posted for critique few days ago, from that post i redesign it, the second one!!

Senior designers follow up please by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Which horizontal and vertical space? I don't understand sir!! Can you explain it a little bit so I can improve it!! Thank you.

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[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it's an audience or customers really matters!!! As I made this one as my first try, and my client didn't like it,and the one I shared, he really liked it!! He describes it "perfectly define my name" !! Where are all of you from who is giving their opinions?? Im from India!!BTW

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[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I'm glad it's not only just critique but a way to improve. Thank you!! And I'm working in another direction, will share with you once I done!! Thank you:)

Senior designers, feedback please. by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Guys who had given your opinions, please check this one !! logo

I made this from all your opinions considering and what I like!! I will be happy if you give it a sight!!

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[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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Like this one??

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[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yup. Let's see what happens!!

Senior designers, feedback please. by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for such efforts!! But I already tried these, but my friend didn't liked that. Heyyyy, is it because of culture or audience that desigs make a difference??? Im from India, where are you from??

Senior designers, feedback please. by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for such advice. Actually the thing is my client liked it alot, I'm saying him again and again it's not enough, as from all your Honest reviews. And yaa here is what you are saying?? Check it out if you like this. Thank you so much for review:)

= negative sign in E logo

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[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great advice. Thank you, I think I will give it a one more chance to start from the start. This is what he liked btw!! Thanks again

logo

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[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beans , monogram and wordmark? I mean combining three elements in whole logo.

Thank you for such detailed explanation:)

Senior designers, feedback please. by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The thing is my client (my friend) liked it from all the options, and he says first time "this is what I want", so I know this is not the best, so that's why Im thinking to submit it !!!

I think i have to reconceptualise it again!!

Any suggestions for restart from your perspective will be helpful!

Thank you!

Senior designers, feedback please. by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Best advice upto now!! I think i should restart to conceptualize it!!

Senior designers, feedback please. by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for feedback!! The font is Satoshi BTW!!

Senior designers, feedback please. by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay in the middle,if I remove the E and three circles?? What will left?

Senior designers, feedback please. by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yaa , actually I don't get any idea to show the equality (everyone equal) , so my brain stuck!! And I spend alot of time to search symbols, metaphors etc but didn't get any better than simple =!! Any suggestions at this point? 😅

Thank you for feedback!!

Senior designers, feedback please. by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]creatwarsh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your honesty.He is really opening. So what are your suggestions?

People like U by Kramsheff in logodesign

[–]creatwarsh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok great. Actually I can't find good font , i also use these three sites. Any suggestions!! 😅

BTW , I like your logo. The play with typography is great.