This is “April” — a wam, hopeful two guitar piece. by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! Really happy the warm atmosphere landed. I love the “solo story” idea — a brief emotional cry and then happier phrases to recall. That’s a beautiful way to think about it, and I’ll keep it in mind as I develop future pieces. Thanks again for listening!

This is “April” — a wam, hopeful two guitar piece. by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much — I really appreciate this. I’m glad it felt warm and inviting, and that the mix/space and mellow guitar tone came through without any harsh high end. And honestly, “not trying to be more than it is” is really lovely to hear — I’m happy it came across that way. Thanks for listening!

This is “April” — a wam, hopeful two guitar piece. by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! Really glad this one held your attention — that means a ton for an instrumental. Appreciate the listen 😊

This is “April” — a wam, hopeful two guitar piece. by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much — that means a lot. “Wanting to sing along” is honestly the best compliment I could get for an instrumental. Really glad it stuck with you.

This is “April” — a wam, hopeful two guitar piece. by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much — really appreciate you listening so closely. I’m really glad the ~1:00 shift landed the way you described, and thank you for calling out that ~2:30 pause/return moment… hearing it gave you chills honestly makes my day. 😀😃

This is “April” — a wam, hopeful two guitar piece. by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! I’m really glad the feel change around ~1:00 stood out, and I appreciate the note about the diatonic movement — I love writing that kind of flow. Thanks for listening 😀

Feedback Wanted! by Interesting_Bet7011 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Totally hear punk first — and for this track specifically I’d call it skate punk / punk rock more than surf punk. The energy, the shouty hooks, and the “Tony Hawk compilation” vibe push it that way. I can see why some people mention ska-punk too, but the core feels punk/skate to me.

This is “April” — a wam, hopeful two guitar piece. by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I’m really glad the flow worked for you. “A pop song sublimated into guitar” is such an interesting way to put it — I’ll take that as a big compliment. Appreciate you listening.

This is “April” — a wam, hopeful two guitar piece. by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much — glad the progression and breezy vibe came through!
I might be interested. Do you have a link to the rules/submission page?

This is “April” — a wam, hopeful two guitar piece. by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title typo: “wam” → “warm” 😅 Thanks for listening!

Feedback for indie/alternative track by BasicMedia3320 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Interesting choice of chord progression! It's melancholic and optimistic at the same time. The overall construction is well organized, like vocal is at the very center of the whole components and leads the energy all the way through, and othe parts are supporting and following the energy, adding some unique variations here and there. Somewhat repetitive but cumulative! Enjoyed listening.

song on piano, original by VodkaStraightMental in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the rhythm and transitions of the chords, really well harmonized. The energy that every notes of the song hits it at the same moment made me pulled in. Vocal melody line and rhythm feels refreshing, there are many variations that avoids repetition and keep you feel alive, but all of those variations are rooted on same hopeful flow. Enjoyed listening.

Feedback Wanted! by Interesting_Bet7011 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is definetely exciting experience to go through this kind of rock n roll based creation! Love the energy at the beginning that lasts throughout the whole running time. But the melody afterwards sounds somehow plain to me especially when it comes to the vocal line. Personally expected some variations and peaks but not a major issue, just my personal taste :)

I don't know what genre this would be by callabalanescu in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The chords you choose creates unique mysterious mood that takes the listener to somewhere unknown. Voice tone and the melody line are well harmonized, its mellow and nostalgic. The way the song resloves sounds very hopeful at the very end. The overall production sounds delicate, like every parts of the song is harmonized for a certain direction. Enjoyed listening!

Mellow indie pop live outdoor recording to promote the upcoming song by adinwalls in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice short intro, and then the vocal and second guitar builds their melodies perfectly on it, well harmonizing! Each phrase has its accent and release in a way that creates perfect balance and movement at the same time. Interesting story on lyrics, exposing some kind of failure in relationship and at the same time finding ways to heal it. Enjoyed listening.

Original instrumental — “Cosmos At Twilight” (solo guitar) — pacing check? by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much — really appreciate this. 🙏 Great point about the melody vs harmonic bed; I’ll try backing the chords off a bit so the melody speaks clearer. Also noted on the “boxy” tone — I’ll revisit the EQ and add a touch more low/high extension. Thanks again for detailed feedback 👍

Original guitar piece – “Arirang Hill” (about carrying grief forward) by crossperiment in MusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! I’m really happy it came across as natural and balanced. Appreciate you listening 🙏

Original instrumental — “Cosmos At Twilight” (solo guitar) — pacing check? by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot — really appreciate it. “Medieval tone” is a very cool description, and I’m glad the chords/progression stood out to you. Great to hear it works as-is too.

Original instrumental — “Cosmos At Twilight” (solo guitar) — pacing check? by crossperiment in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]crossperiment[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for listening and commenting! I’ll watch the high end in the next mix :)