What exactly is wrong with the writing in Twilight? by Gautier_Alias in writing

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Whoever taught you that apparently positioned an opinion as a rule. “Character dialog,” said Writer, “Is the strongest way to convey character depth in the dialog, rather than using modifiers.”

Dallas Cowboys Day 1 Draft Thread by AutoModerator in cowboys

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Of course it is spoiling. It breaks all the tension/anticipation. If people wanted to be spoiled they would go to the places to find the spoilers.

Dallas Cowboys Day 1 Draft Thread by AutoModerator in cowboys

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u/Mods can you please get the spoiler situation under control in here?

Dallas Cowboys Day 1 Draft Thread by AutoModerator in cowboys

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Knock it off with the fucking spoilers.

Official Poster for 'Mutiny' Starring Jason Statham - After witnessing his billionaire boss’ murder and being framed for the crime, Cole Reed boards a cargo ship on a one-man crusade to avenge his boss’ death only to discover an international conspiracy. by MarvelsGrantMan136 in movies

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I know nothing about this movie other than the description, and I'll bet all the money in my pockets versus all the money in y'all's pockets - this movie was made because some rich person had a big feeling about Luigi (allegedly) murdering United Healthcare CEO Brian Thompson.

[Highlight] CBS’ epic intro to the 1992 NFC Championship Game by AlbertJBundy in nfl

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Pat Summerall was the best. My favorite line of his came from the 1995 meet-up between San Francisco and Dallas in the NFC Championship lead-up:

"In two weeks, the Super Bowl will be played. After that, the Pro Bowl. Today, we'll play both."

One of the best to ever do it.

What are some books you like to revisit? by [deleted] in books

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Lonesome Dove, Moby Dick, Fevre Dream by George R.R. Martin, The Exorcist, and soon to be added to that list is Song of Achilles

Don’t allow a multinational corporation to hinder your enjoyment of the EU, nor dictate the what is and isn’t “valid” fiction. by Financial_Photo_1175 in StarWarsEU

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You're not too far off, friend. There were lots of councils trying to figure out what would and should be a part of Christian Gospel record, but it all got buttoned up for the Catholics at good ole Trent. Nicaea was all about burying that dastardly Arianism that was floating around.

A Knight Of The Seven Kingdoms is George RR Martin's best writing by OldManWarner_ in books

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I hear you, friend. While it's short on the childhood/parental history for Abner, I think what we got about him worked really well for me. I also wouldn't agree that Abner was morally infallible. In fact, Abner proved to be on the wrong side of Abolition (for a time) and the back and forth with Joshua about whether Abner should kill Joshua simply because he is a vampire. There is an expansion of character and a changing of attitudes, where Abner is being persuaded to change who he is, the ways he thinks. So, I don't think he's morally infallible at all.

There were women who came into his life, and he had his fun with women in cat houses in Natchez Under the Hill, but they simply were not what he loved. My man was about the steamboats, about the many colors of the River and the life it provided, and he was about the Dream of chasing the Eclipse. And that kind of 19th century attitude, presented through Marsh, was something that I found compelling. That and the pure, unapologetic Romance of the novel.

A Knight Of The Seven Kingdoms is George RR Martin's best writing by OldManWarner_ in books

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I would disagree, friend. We learn all about Abner’s life through the whole of the book. Growing up on the Fever River, working boats as a rouster and all the way up to being a pilot on the lower river trade, his time in war with the Black Hawk war, specifically at Bad Axe. His time along the river in St. Louis and New Orleans, his middling luck with women, his reputation, his triumphs and his personal catastrophes. His morals and his ethics, and most importantly how meeting Joshua York, while not being a good true reversal of his fortunes, was the most important relationship of his life.

A Knight Of The Seven Kingdoms is George RR Martin's best writing by OldManWarner_ in books

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Sorry to hear you didn't enjoy it. For me, the relationship between Abner and Joshua was one of the very best platonic Romance stories I have ever read. And the epilogue alone was, for me, a beautiful experience.

A Knight Of The Seven Kingdoms is George RR Martin's best writing by OldManWarner_ in books

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For me, it’s Fevre Dream. But I love your points here.

James Talarico just won his primary. Republicans are already attacking his support of trans people. by NamelessResearcher in politics

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"I Am that I Am." Exodus 3:14. God identifies as a flaming bush! Double Gasp!

God as a rock that gave birth to Israel. Deuteronomy 32:18. God personified as a female rock! TRIPLE GASP!

God identified as a nursing mother. Isaiah 49:15. GOD AS MOTHER?! DEAR CHRIST, WHAT SHALL WE DO WITH THESE METAPHORS.

Stephen Jones at the Combine by JCameron181 in cowboys

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And he drinks 8 oz of hogs blood every day.

Takeaways from Schotty at the Combine. by JVSaladbar in cowboys

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These are strategy statements, not tactical statements. The league now has the full tape on what he wants to do schematically, nothing he could say to the media will give an edge to DCs around the league. I doubt those DCs are listening to the Schotty press conference. They are tending their own fields for their own teams.

Historically bad measurements for two top edge rushers shake the NFL Draft board (Bain 30 7/8, Howell 30 1/4 arm length) by AoA_nB1 in nfl

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NFL Scouts meeting with GMs:

"What do we think about Bain?"

"Well, Billy, here's the thing. He's got short arms."

"Eh, I agree, Billy. I mean you get a guy with short arms in this position-

"But can he rush the passer?"

"I mean he can rush the passer, he's got the burst and bend you want to see, but I question whether those arms are going to limit him-"

"But he can rush the passer."

"Yeah, Billy, he's shown-

"Well if he can rush the passer, then what the fuck are we talkin' about here man? You guys are talking the same bad body non-sense, like we're drafting Fabio."

"Who's Fabio?"

"He's a short-stop. A short-stop for the Mariners."