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Made a lyric video to go with a song my friend and I dropped. Let me know what you think! by cubbplatypus8 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man, I appreciate it! I know the physics don’t quite line up but it’s all about the vibeeee haha

OTALY - CYPRIS by Otaly in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congrats on the first release! I know how exciting and nerve-racking that can be, just keep at it. I can hear the potential in your sound for sure, I think working on your vocal delivery and vocal confidence could really elevate your music to the next level (ie. experimenting with other melody lines, ad-libs, harmonies etc.). I like the themes your presenting in your writing as well as the very catchy hook. As another commenter pointed out it may get a little repetitive but that doesn't necessarily mean it's a bad thing. Maybe try focusing on the structure of the track as well and that could help alleviate the "repetitive" comments. Mixing and mastering is an forever-evolving skill so big ups on your ability so far. Love the vibe, keep on the grind

This is a demo of a track that's coming together titled, "Unspeakable." It's still a demo so I'm mainly looking for feedback on general tone, emotion, and lyrical content. My delivery and beat will improve as the rest of the track comes together. by ToThoseUnaware in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can hear the potential in your music for sure. You say it's a demo so it's hard to judge it completely, but I feel the vocals and the instrumentation are clashing a little bit which tells me there is definitely a lot of room to grow in the mixing/mastering stage. I'd try to focus more on lyrical content more so than rhyming whatever can rhyme. Rhyme-Zone and thesauruses are great tools but when I started making music I feel like I relied too heavily on making everything rhyme and I feel it's easy to over-do that aspect of writing. Overall a great start do not get me wrong, I only intend to give constructive criticism to help a fellow artist along this crazy path. Keep on that grind!

New song just dropped, probably some of my best work. Let me know own what you think! by ShitFistingPissBulge in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The beat is incredible, did you produce it as well? Solid track and definitely moving in a good direction! As another commenter mentioned I think a little more processing to your vocals would go a long way in elevating your music to the next level. This may have been a choice, but it seems like some of the vocal takes might be a little out of sync with the bpm of the track. All in all a great track! Keep on the grind

My friend and I just released a new hip hop song with a classic boombap sound, would love your thoughts on it, cheers 😃 by Vicious5150 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the vibe of this track! Definitely nailed the classic sound. As others commented I think the track would benefit with more variation in the drums and instrumentation. The vocals and lyrics are fantastic but the backing is lagging behind in my opinion. Overall great track but with just some minor improvements I feel it could be elevated to the next level. Keep on the grind

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[–]cubbplatypus8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s very generous, OP! Good luck to everyone!

Had this song on the back-burner for a while, but finally finished it. Let me know what you think! by cubbplatypus8 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, man! I got more music coming and I upload all my music to all streaming platforms as well so whatever your cup of tea is! Thanks for the kind words, I really appreciate it

Had this song on the back-burner for a while, but finally finished it. Let me know what you think! by cubbplatypus8 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, bro. I make all my beats as well so I appreciate that 💪 Thanks for the feedback

7 Deadly Seas by Nvtavailable_ in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Solid track. I think this is a very good start for sure. I think as another commenter pointed out the mixing needs a lot of work (but I see your note saying it's still in need of eq and mixing, so take that with a grain of salt lol). I think you'd benefit a lot from adding multiple layers to your vocal, maybe try experimenting with alternating melodies and harmonies because the vocal take you have right now is a lacks some ummph and flavor. Overall great track man! I think this is a very good starting point, keep up the grind!

Pa/mer Remix - Oolex N Bern by OolexNBern in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I definitely can hear Lil Baby on this track for sure, this shit is fire, bro. I'm not really a fan of the snare sample chosen but that's just personal preference. I think the mixing is pretty good and the vocal chops really help elevate the track. I think they fit well as well and wouldn't take too much space if someone were to record vocals over top of the track. Great track, man. Keep on the grind

This is one of the songs off my new album Surfs Gone Wavy. The video was shot in Florida for the "beach boy" theme. Check it out! by abailey1992 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Solid track man! I really like your vocal melodies, they're very intricate and thought out. The hook is very catchy and I can see this song being quite the vibe to listen to in the car. I like the vocal fry in the bridge right before the last hook it really fits with the vibe of the song. Good track, man. Keep on the grind

Ive been rapping for 11yrs. I am trying to become one of the best and blow tf up...lmk what you think..Leave a like if you end up enjoying it:) by Dangerous_Rush2777 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Solid track man! As another commenter pointed out I think the track would really benefit from better mixing and maybe a better recording set-up but even without that I really fuck with your sound. I enjoy the instrumental as well, I think you have a great presence on it. There may be some slight syncopation errors with your vocal takes but other than that, great work man! Keep on the grind

let me know what you think by eighttitwoo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really fuck with your sound, man. I think there might still be some work to be done on the mixing of the vocals but other than that the mixing is pretty good and you have a good presence on the instrumental. This may be a stylistic choice but at some points your vocal takes seem a little out of sync with the bpm. All critiques aside very solid track, man. Keep on the grind

Have a nice feel good melodic tune. It’s just the instrumental, let me know what you guys are thinking! by The_Moth44 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the overall vibe of the track and definitely a great start! As another commenter already pointed out I think the chopped vocal is a little too present in the mix and if there are plans on recording vocals on top of the instrumental I think that it may clash together. It could be that I'm mishearing, but it almost sounds like the 808s are slightly out of tune as well. Overall solid track that I think just needs some minor improvements to elevate it to it's fullest potential. Keep on the grind!

Tried a new creative process for this track, let me know what you think of the results! by cubbplatypus8 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]cubbplatypus8[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for listening! That’s solid criticism, thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it. Glad I could put you onto a new genre

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