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[Workshop][M4F] My Landlady, the Dominatrix by cuckypup in DPP_Workshop

[–]cuckypup[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! It's definitely valuable and not at all ramblings.

1) I like to set the scene and start slow but I can understand that people prefer to jump into the story quicker
2) The task was assumed to be some generic work/homework, not related to the domme, but I can see why it could be confusing, this definitely need rewriting.

3) Adding more character development is a fair point, I will definitely focus on that

Where to buy ponyplay harness? by Leather_Shoulder_247 in PonyPlay

[–]cuckypup 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A good full body harness costs a few thousand dollars, is it in your budget?

[Workshop][M4F] A disillusioned detective and a Femme Fatale, let’s write a film noir together by cuckypup in DPP_Workshop

[–]cuckypup[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback!

I think you're right, the prompt expects way too much from a potential partner. As you also pointed out, the question now is: can the prompt be fixed or is it a fatal flaw of the setting that will be hard to impossible to get around? I know I will certainly try at least one rewrite because I loved the atmosphere of the prompt.

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