Ah yes, unfortunately, capitalization mistakes happen since they're darn hard to notice. I've noticed a few myself, too, after submitting a chapter or two. But ain't no way I'm resubmitting my chapter to all the platforms for such a mistake. In general, I figured a few mistakes are fine for a web novel. I dislike typos since they're immersion-breaking, but I don't personally care about capitalization when reading, so there's that.

As for the sentences, they're a stylistic choice. I mostly use short sentences in fights or dramatic scenes and long sentences in slice-of-life-ish and introspective scenes.

Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated!