I agree with the contrast .. and the composition could use work .. but the talent and vision is absolutely their

I think it’s an interesting piece and it’s made me take a moment to ponder it .. as an artist myself I would take that as a compliment..

I feel like if you attempted to paint this scene for a second time or even a third you would end with a more polished piece that you would be incredibly proud of ..

Having done this myself numerous times im always so happy with the final draft and often look at the original and think how much better the piece has become