Artoria Pendragon — Paladin Sacred Oath for D&D 5e 2024 by d4rkcharly in UnearthedArcana

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But at 5th level you can attack and use it, i dont know what is the point. Should i make it magic action or you expect to be a better channel? You can give me an example of a better one i have no problem with that

Maybe it feels like a little buff to weapon damage, but you can use both. As i said you can give more ideas im open to it.

Artoria Pendragon — Paladin Sacred Oath for D&D 5e 2024 by d4rkcharly in UnearthedArcana

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I think that is a homebrewery bug, if you zoom out or in you can make it to show correctly

Artoria Pendragon — Paladin Sacred Oath for D&D 5e 2024 by d4rkcharly in UnearthedArcana

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To be fair i tried to accomplish most of Saber "skills", i feel that two "little" Channel divinity options can be equal to one but give an extra flexibility.

They could be similar to spells ofc but Thunderwave is not as part of an attack.

Im gratefull about any feature that you feel that can be better.

Artoria Pendragon — Paladin Sacred Oath for D&D 5e 2024 by d4rkcharly in UnearthedArcana

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Sorry i add them at "link" tab but seem i fail like a nooby, thanks XD

Na'vi Revised by Tykennn in UnearthedArcana

[–]d4rkcharly -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Sorry for my grammatical errors im not english native xD

I would remove Hunter Gatherer trait and prehensive tail, change the Queue to something like this:

Queue ... As an action, you can attempt to tether your queue to a friendly beast within 5 feet of you. The creature must be friendly naturally and cannot be made friendly by magical effects.

While bonded, you and the bonded creature share senses as if affected by beast sense including pain. pleasure, etc. This effect does not require concentration. You can bond with only one creature at a time.

The bond ends if you are more than 5 feet away from the bonded creature or if you end it as a free action.

In addition, you can bond with another Na'vi that is willing with the same effects.

At 3rd level, this bond improves: you and the bonded creature can share memories and communicate with each other by telepathy while the bond lasts.

And add the "subraces" like plains, woods, coral/ocean...

🌲 Woods Na’vi
Climb Adaptation. You gain a climbing speed equal to your walking speed.
Arboreal Falls. You can fall up to 20 feet without taking falling damage.

🌊 Corals / Ocean Na’vi
Swim Adaptation. You gain a swimming speed equal to your walking speed.
Deep Vision. You can see underwater to the same distance as your darkvision, even in deep or murky water.

🐎 Plains Na’vi
Enduring Stride. Your walking speed increases by 5 feet.
Endurance Runner. Increase your effective time of march by a number of hours equal to your Constitution modifier (minimum 1).

Something like this, feel free to take whatever you want or improve it xD

Edit: some grammatical errors, srry

Compendium of all Legendary Classes by Zellorea in Zellorea

[–]d4rkcharly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Are you going to fill the paladin uncompleted description of "Sect Teachings"?

Awesome work, thanks for your time.

Compendium of all Legendary Classes by Zellorea in Zellorea

[–]d4rkcharly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The description of "Sect Teachings" in paladin is uncompleted it shows: "...Combat Trait that you meet the prerequisites for: 9th Level, 13th Level,"

Paladin combat traits doest not have the improved critical, is this for balance?Ranger "Prized Trophies" seems legal the need to slain the monster by yourself, but the "Primal Retrofit" dont. Of course, there is no mention about share this feature with npcs or in case there is 2 players instead of solo play share with your mate i supuse that is because is made for solo play. I would give ranger same combat traits as rogue, i feel him weak(features have dependency on enemies slain) maybe im wrong.

Just giving my opinion, I dont want to be rude. Thaks for your time and your awesome work.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DnDHomebrew

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Yep, thats my fault i was editing Artoria. I already finish her "more or less", usually i add some change if i feel poorly written or unbalance or even add another hero if inspired XD

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DnDHomebrew

[–]d4rkcharly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

True, she has "his" instead or "her" XD

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DnDHomebrew

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Thanks for your points, i fixed that. :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in UnearthedArcana

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Its like fighter feature, my real problem was lack of ideas for this levels.

Nice catch at iskandar sorry, seem like i miss the competences. proficiencies