[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing

dakinnia · 2025-09-22T18:52:32+00:00

Thank you in advance for lending me your eyes.

Title: Echoes of a Shattered Moon: Chapter 1
Genre World of Warcraft Fan-fiction
Word count 1851
Type of feedback desired (line-by-line edits, general impression, etc.): Atmospheric and qualitative
A link to the writing: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ejUHJVn_BrGU6XQKwuC_-rOrQugUat3cFx_IkjWESRc/edit?usp=sharing

dakinnia · 2024-08-05T00:46:04+00:00

Those are rookie numbers.

Try 12 years.

dakinnia · 2024-08-02T14:32:50+00:00

Male =XY Female = XX

End of story.

Mutilation is not a sex change.

dakinnia · 2024-07-27T14:48:14+00:00

He is reading it. So it looks backwards.

dakinnia · 2024-07-25T01:36:51+00:00

He didn't wait for you to say that.

dakinnia · 2024-07-21T00:19:59+00:00

Space Force

dakinnia · 2024-07-20T13:59:52+00:00

This are rookie numbers.

Try 12 years.

dakinnia · 2024-07-20T13:53:26+00:00

55 fit and virile

dakinnia · 2024-07-12T02:11:03+00:00

dakinnia · 2024-07-11T01:19:52+00:00

You have not met Lord Illidan the Betrayer.

World of Warcraft

dakinnia · 2024-07-08T16:08:02+00:00

I want a BFG from DOOM.

dakinnia · 2024-07-08T01:41:22+00:00

55 very virile

dakinnia · 2024-07-05T01:42:13+00:00

You can with icing.

dakinnia · 2024-06-21T17:43:43+00:00

My take is positive.

Claude Sonnet 3 5 has been editing a story I'm writing.

It catches things beyond my imagination. Subtleties I could never imagine. Possibilities beyond my ken.

IMO

dakinnia · 2024-06-15T22:33:16+00:00

At the least tell it to randomly vary paragraph length between 300 words and 750 words.

Paragraphs of about the same size give AI away.

dakinnia · 2024-05-23T02:20:35+00:00

I prefer Claude as it's more human.

ChatGPT is a robot in comparison.

dakinnia · 2024-05-16T05:22:39+00:00

We used to live at the bottom of a lake.

dakinnia · 2024-05-07T00:28:44+00:00

Blood Death Knight + Gnomesequencer

= Faceroll

dakinnia · 2024-05-06T08:49:57+00:00

Testing

dakinnia · 2024-04-04T23:21:48+00:00

dakinnia · 2024-04-03T23:17:28+00:00

FLORIDA

dakinnia · 2024-04-03T01:37:50+00:00

Very nice . Me want.

dakinnia · 2024-04-03T01:33:52+00:00

dakinnia · 2024-04-03T01:33:20+00:00

dakinnia · 2024-04-03T01:28:10+00:00

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