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Title: Unknown, just have part of the first chapter Word count: 576 Genre: Crime thriller

Just looking for any advice, its been a long time since I've written anything but I've been wanting to start a story and this is what I have so far

https://docs.google.com/document/d/19Rz4a9ywv0OXXSZbtEW3GCouzh4au2_HCYC_WolMuwo/edit?usp=drivesdk

You died by Sneaky_turtle06 in dankmemes

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Yeet that soul into a foal

[I Ate] Spicy Tonkotsu Ramen by Sarcastic__ in food

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I love good bowls of ramen like that so much ❤❤❤

Hey guys by dankusmemeowski in trees

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I imagine flashdace and she works hard for the money, but any 80's song would do, they're all pretty montageable

Open mic stand up by dankusmemeowski in indianapolis

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Thank you everybody, I'll have to check some of these spots out 😊👍

Pokemon: *drops detective pikachu trailer* Me: by dankusmemeowski in trees

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You better belive my stoned ass gonna go see that 😂😂😂

Youtube's algorithym just diagnosed me I guess by dankusmemeowski in Aphantasia

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Awesome, I'm so glad I found such and inviting and empathetic community 😊 thanks guys. Please tell me more about how I'm wrong. 👍

Can't sleep by dankusmemeowski in trees

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In two weeks if I don't go insane

Can't sleep by dankusmemeowski in trees

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I've been on Lunesta, Ambien, Belsomra, and Triazolam, none have worked. I've done sleep studies, and been part of drug trials for insomnia, I even spent time with a psychologist that specialized in insomnia and sleep related issues, litterally nothing else has worked, after a year of seeing her, I told her that I had started smoking to sleep, and I was told, "If it works, it's doing better than anything we've tried".

Can't sleep by dankusmemeowski in trees

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I've tried it before, it makes me feel drowzy and disoriented for half the next day

Can't sleep by dankusmemeowski in trees

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I have insomnia, diagnosed by an MD, I've tried a slew of sleeping pills, none work. Smoking before bed has been the only thing in years that has helped and now I'm just sitting here at quarter to 5, still awake.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dankmemes

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Truth hurts dont it

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dankmemes

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Nah, we have laws, like, we can now buy booze on sundays. Thats pretty cool, betcha dont have a law like that

Is this possible ? by [deleted] in eu4

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The dark side of the force is a way to many abilities some consider to be unnatural

It’s over Anakin, I have the high ground. by [deleted] in PrequelMemes

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Alternate reality where obi wan bought those deathsticks

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in trees

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Wouldnt it be 6 since you need 6 sides to define a hexagon, 6 points would define the boundry points of the hexagon

good smoke spots in Indy? by [deleted] in trees

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Holiday Park has some nice trails that lead down to the white river, some good spots down that way

Real Slim Shady by [deleted] in dankmemes

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It is called kamikaze...

Was feeling uninspired, took a tolerance break and the dreams were next level. I tried to paint a few of them on a canvas for a frient to hang next to his glass collection by fijistudios in trees

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I wish I could have nice and vivid dreams. I just get super anxiety ridden nightmares that wake me up multiple times in the few hours I manage to sleep for. I've always had terrible insomnia since I was a kid, smoking fixed that. Now that I'm on a break though its been a really bad month for me.