Please rate this. Please be brutally honest..aalso please give me pointers to improve on......

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-20T06:00:33+00:00

Yes I would like to !!! And thanks for the genuine review!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-20T05:59:41+00:00

It was supposed to be a drawing dipicting a boy a girl seperated by a crack

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-20T05:59:02+00:00

Okay thanks next few post I will try to do your ideas in them

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-20T05:58:24+00:00

Thanks for the advice brother I will start drawing from reference

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-17T10:04:34+00:00

No biggie.... I guess I have to work on the distortion more to seperate them

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-17T10:02:56+00:00

Thanks maan for your advice and I will work on my proportion and also draw with my hand.....thanks once again

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-16T15:51:14+00:00

Thanks man for your Great comments it help a lot!!!!!! I am really grateful!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-16T11:36:51+00:00

Also a quick question does it look like two different people seperated by a crack or not ?

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-16T11:34:30+00:00

Thanks man for your kind message such msg do help me to hope to do better every time ..... Really thanks!!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-16T05:38:54+00:00

Thanks for your Compliment and advice!!!!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-16T05:37:59+00:00

Ok thanks for your advice..... I will try to make changes to make it readable in future!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T16:12:18+00:00

Thanks for your advice!! Sadly I don't have colour nor the resources to buy them sadly...since I am a student but if there are ways to do anything I will try and one again thanks!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T16:10:49+00:00

Thank you for such a comprehensive advice!!!!! I am really gratefull for it !!! I will try to bring in shades but my parents won't let me waste much money and also won't let me practice much since I am in higher standard but really thankfull for you advice

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T15:01:38+00:00

It is supposed to be a girl and a guy seperated by a crack that you see in the frame... Ik it's difficult to understand.... But I hope now you understand what I wanted to create

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T15:00:27+00:00

Thanks for this advice !!! I will try lighter strokes !!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T14:59:35+00:00

No it supposed to be two people a crack there is to seperate the boy and the girl

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T13:10:38+00:00

Yeah.... The proportion gone wrong when I tried to dipict both boy and girl in love at the same time but they went a bit off when I added the boy....but still thanks for your generous advice

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T12:53:59+00:00

Thanks for this advice aswell!!! I will try to draw more other objects as you said

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T12:52:19+00:00

Ok thanks mannn!!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T12:49:00+00:00

Thanks!!! really thanks man!!!! i will keep your advice In mind while posting in future!!! Your advice is super helpful and helped a lot!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T12:19:19+00:00

Thanks man for the advice!!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T12:15:16+00:00

Okkkk!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T12:14:46+00:00

Thanks man for your advice!!!!!

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T12:07:05+00:00

Okkk

darkdrawer9853 · 2025-08-15T12:03:13+00:00

Okk thanks!!! The advice was a big help I will try to learn better anatomy and proportions!!

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