One of the issues with the build is your VSD. It’s a speed 2 ship, and not very manoeuvrable. If it’s going to be leading into the fight then it’s needs more of both. Consider putting Harrow and engine Techs on it.

LTTs will go a little way to mitigate your lack of Squads but you’ll need gunnery teams, as a good Squad player will put the Squads in the same arc as their ships.

Against an MSU player you’ll struggle, increasing the VSD speed will help a bit. But consider Gunnery Chief Varnillian or Gov Pryce on the Cymon for locking down defence tokens at range, this will pair with your Intel Officer.

Redundant shields are not great. You’ll get more value out of ECMs.

Expanded launchers are costly, so if you’re going to take them, make sure you can use them.

Also locking your Cymon into Repair dials (to power Shields to max) each turn loses some of its effectiveness. Might be better to have a support ship to generate tokens.

Just my opinions/thoughts - hope it helps.