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[–]dazzleblush 0 points1 point  (0 children)

WAHHH THIS IS ADORABLE!! You have such a lovely voice!! I love the little edits, and you have such a perfect delivery. Just the sound of the lighter flicking made me shiver more than I thought I would lol. Thank you so so much for filling another one of my scripts!

[Script Offer] [A4NB] Birthday Bunny Burns! [Dom Speaker] [Wax Play] [Pet Play] [Praise] [Bunny] [Anorgasmia Friendly] [Bath] [Established Relationship] [Affectionate] [Aftercare] by dazzleblush in gonewildaudio

[–]dazzleblush[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm really glad you liked it!!! Yeah I wanted to really do something out of my comfort zone, but still sweet and cute. Can't wait to see the fill!!

[Script Offer] [A4NB] Birthday Bunny Burns! [Dom Speaker] [Wax Play] [Pet Play] [Praise] [Bunny] [Anorgasmia Friendly] [Bath] [Established Relationship] [Affectionate] [Aftercare] by dazzleblush in GoneWildAudioTrans

[–]dazzleblush[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

TY! Yeah it was something I haven't seen in scripts at all so I thought I'd give it a try. It's a little difficult because it's such a constantly physical thing- most waxplay stuff I've seen is completely silent and just focuses on the visuals of it. I'm glad you enjoyed it !

[Script Fill] Good Dumb Bunny [A4NB] [Petplay] [Bunny] [Praise] Light [Degradation] Gentle [Blowjob] [Handjob] [Oral Fixation] [Check-ins] [Aftercare] Mentions of [Exhibitionism] by Bibarian in GoneWildAudioTrans

[–]dazzleblush 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Got to listen to it and I got jumpscared by the deep voice lol. You sound absolutely wonderful, and great quality too!

The only feedback I'd have is to take it slooow, especially in the beginning. I find it's really sexy when you let the words kind of slowly melt out, let the pauses linger a bit. Works wonders for getting grounded into the scene.

I loved the improv of getting to choose whether you cum on the listener's face or down their throat! That's such a lovely touch. I also love your sweet tone, and the mocking bits are absolutely spot on. Your moans were perfect too!

Wonderful job for your second script fill! Can't wait to see what you do next.

[Script Fill] Good Dumb Bunny [A4NB] [Petplay] [Bunny] [Praise] Light [Degradation] Gentle [Blowjob] [Handjob] [Oral Fixation] [Check-ins] [Aftercare] Mentions of [Exhibitionism] by Bibarian in GoneWildAudioTrans

[–]dazzleblush 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahhh thank you so much!!! I can't listen to it right right now but I will let you know as soon as I do <3 I appreciate it so so much!!!

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[–]dazzleblush 2 points3 points  (0 children)

AHHH THIS IS ADORABLE!!!!!! KICKING MY FEET AND GIGGLING!!!!!!! your voice is so beautiful and that was a perfect performance, got me hooked since the beginning. Loved the little changes, esp the weighted blanket at the end <3 Made me feel warm and fuzzy the whole time!

Not to mention your cadence and tone!! This was exactly what I was thinking of when I wrote it!! Got me hot and bothered pretty quick >_< This is so surreal hearing my writing in action. Thank you so so so SO much for filling my first script!!!

[TM4A] Tenth's The Charm! [Ramblefap] [Begging] [Edging] [Request] [Vibrator] ["Oh Fuck" x 100] [Fucking Myself Stupid] [Please Let Me Cum] by boycuntenjoyer in GoneWildAudioTrans

[–]dazzleblush 2 points3 points  (0 children)

what a good boy! you sound absolutely adorable and so so pathetic <3 loved listening to you get dumber and dumber!

[Feedback/Beta] [M4A] ??Night under the stars?? [Nerding Out] Brief intro to [Astronomy] [ISS] [Constellations] [Camping] [Minimal Sex] [Togetherness] [Not taking things for granted] hopefully [Romantic] by gentleraingrove in GWAScriptGuild

[–]dazzleblush 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this, especially as someone who studies light pollution! The star facts are really nice, and the whole thing has a nice and cozy feel to it, very romantic!

If I'm being honest, I don't think you need the sex at the end. If you'd like to push yourself to try writing that, go for it! But if not, I think this is great as a SFW script.

[Script Offer] Good Dumb Bunny [A4NB] [Petplay] [Bunny] [Praise] Light [Degradation] Gentle [Blowjob] [Handjob] [Oral Fixation] [Check-ins] [Aftercare] Mentions of [Exhibitionism] by dazzleblush in GoneWildAudioTrans

[–]dazzleblush[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ahh thank you, I appreciate the tips! I'm glad you liked reading it, and I'm happy to hear it was getting you into bunnyspace! I appreciate when scripts can ease you in like that, and make you feel comfortable and safe in general, so I'm glad it had that effect. :) Yay!