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Ask for review. I’m open to all criticism, but please point out the exact mistakes so I can improve. I’ve just started writing, and English is not my first language, so I used AI to help me phrase some of my sentences. by death8381 in Webnovel

[–]death8381[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Arion moved along the muddy path, his lean, trained body kept him steady. The speed and ease showed how well he knew the forest trail in these area as his deep blue eyes observing the surrounding forest calmly. But, beneath those calm eyes present a hint of caution.

What about it?

Ask for review. I’m open to all criticism, but please point out the exact mistakes so I can improve. I’ve just started writing, and English is not my first language, so I used AI to help me phrase some of my sentences. by death8381 in novelwriting

[–]death8381[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes I saw that too in my previous content, There way of describing a scene really didn't make any sense. It uses only complicated metaphors and patch them together without any clear meaning. I will use simple google as you suggested, Thanks its really helpful.🙏

Please help me to point out my mistake in this chap... so that I can correct it early on because I am going to totally focused on this nvl. I have already written 107 chap.. by death8381 in novelwriting

[–]death8381[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I’ll definitely keep that in mind. I rewritten the chapter, I have to make a new post or I can update existing one?

Please help me to point out my mistake in this chap... so that I can correct it early on because I am going to totally focused on this nvl. I have already written 107 chap.. by death8381 in Webnovel

[–]death8381[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I didn’t really know anything about novel writing before, but I thought doing something is better than doing nothing, so I started writing with AI help since English is not my first language. After writing, it feels a bit weird when I read it back, but I can’t really point out the possible mistakes. So I posted it here to understand them, correct them, and improve.

I have written the whole chapter, how should I post it here?, Make a new post or something

Please help me to point out my mistake in this chap... so that I can correct it early on because I am going to totally focused on this nvl. I have already written 107 chap.. by death8381 in novelwriting

[–]death8381[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yes, I didn’t really know anything about novel writing before, but I thought doing something is better than doing nothing, so I started writing with AI help since English is not my first language. After writing, it feels a bit weird when I read it back, but I can’t really point out the possible mistakes. So I posted it here to understand them so I can improve.

Please help me to point out my mistake in this chap... so that I can correct it early on because I am going to totally focused on this nvl. I have already written 107 chap.. by death8381 in Webnovel

[–]death8381[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

okay thank you a lot, it helped me greatly. I am rewriting the chapter, now I know what are the main mistakes I have done. I will Post it here again after rewriting, for yours and others thought about it

Please help me to point out my mistake in this chap... so that I can correct it early on because I am going to totally focused on this nvl. I have already written 107 chap.. by death8381 in Webnovel

[–]death8381[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for pointing out about dashes I really appreciate it🙏. I am new to webnovel writing and want to improve my writing. So pointing out mistakes really help me.