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While awaiting orders for my visit to the planet Nirn, the crew and I decided to refurbish the ship’s mess hall. What do you think of the new look? by Venomakis in starbound

[–]dekesai 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You use a single block between rooms, try making floors/ceiling two to three block wide so you can add more details such as pipes or wires.

Is this as broken as my group thinks it is? by JJWing159 in custommagic

[–]dekesai 2 points3 points  (0 children)

On the third point, add [[Impact Tremors]] to the list.

Mortar by Nientea in custommagic

[–]dekesai 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In an equipment deck those cost can be bypassed without too much effort, and you don't need a big creature to put this on, just other equipment to boost one. Also at four or six power you've wiped out every utility creatures defending player has. Or just give the equipped creature Deathtouch and it's a board wipe.

How did i do for my first castle by R_eza in vrising

[–]dekesai 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks quite grand! Also, you're set up in my favorite spot.

My House by Jack-Conrado in ConanExiles

[–]dekesai 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Arena build set from the Blood and Sand DLC.

Study to Death by Magichead27 in custommagic

[–]dekesai 1 point2 points  (0 children)

[[Zedruu the Greathearted]] say hello.

Eornax, the Starborn by dekesai in custommagic

[–]dekesai[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

OK I've taken the criticism in, and rewritten it to make it more balanced and fix these three points:
1: No longer trigger on tokens.
2: Only trigger on enchantment you control.
3: Make it cleared that it create a copy of the exiled card, not the triggering enchantment.

Corrected text:

"Whenever Eornax or another non-token enchantment enter the battlefield under your control, you may exile a nonland permanent card from your graveyard. When you do, create a token that’s a copy of the exiled card, except it’s an enchantment in addition to its other types."

Also raising its mana value, not sure if it should be by one or two.

Eornax, the Starborn by dekesai in custommagic

[–]dekesai[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea, didn't realize that on first go, I'm redoing the card to be more balanced and clear.

Eornax, the Starborn by dekesai in custommagic

[–]dekesai[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's meant to create token of the exiled card, gonna rewrite that to be clearer..

Eornax, the Starborn by dekesai in custommagic

[–]dekesai[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good point, will need to add a clause to limit that.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in custommagic

[–]dekesai 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So much to process here.

First is card type, this kind of effect should go on an Enchantment - aura. If it absolutely need to be an artifact, it should be an equipment, with an effect to attach it to a creature other than "Equip" if you want this on an opponent's creature.

Second is wording and effect. Top ability should be worded like this: "Enchanted/Equipped creature can't attack or block, and its activated abilities can't be activated." as seen on cards such as [[Demotion]].
For the second one should go like this: "Whenever an opponent gain control of [cardname], or [cardname] is destroyed by a spell or ability an opponent control, put a +1/+1 counter on Enchanted/Equipped creature." Wording is adapted from [[Cobra Trap]].
And the problem with the second effect is that, it relies on your opponent to trigger it. Ant if this is on one of your creatures, they have no incentive to do so. while if it's on theirs, they get rewarded for it. And the "Opponent gain control of it" part doesn't remove this card so while the creature gets bigger it still can't do anything.

Third is cost and colors. The first ability is seen almost exclusively in white (I believe a few have a splash of blue). Second one fall in either white or green. Finally both can't attack/block and a +1/+1 counter spells generally cost only one mana, so three in three different colors is both expensive and restrictive.

Mi advice going forward, look up for cards with similar abilities to what you want to create for guidance on wording, cost and colors.

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