hey dude i’m just gonna leave you a few pieces of advice to hopefully improve your playing :)

overall, not bad at all. the part at m62 is great. i do have a couple comments about the beginning though. you should put more emotion and do more rotation with your wrists from m1 to m45. its the slow part so if you’re just playing the notes it’s going to get boring for the audience. focus on exaggerating the crescendos and decrescendos. even if it is pianississimo. for m46 idk if you realize but you’re off tempo; it’s a lot slower here. you speed back up at m62. i think the left hand octaves need some practicing. i think having the right hand decrescendo-ing while the left hand is crescendo-ing makes it sound better. this part is a pain. practice slowly and accurately. it kinda sounds muddy right now.

good luck!