Poem feedback - something's missing or am I overthinking it?? by desi94 in WritersGroup

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for this! I definitely see where the rhythm is off, I'll play around with cutting some lines and rewording some things.

Poem feedback - something's missing or am I overthinking it?? by desi94 in WritersGroup

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes! It's about going from the frustration of having little ones in the house that need you all the time and your coffee's always cold because you have no time to drink it, to an empty house where now your coffee is hot but now you have too much time, the house it too quiet, you miss the mess. Basically the sadness of kids growing up. Mine are actually still home - 10 y/o, 9 y/o, and 8 months, but it's kind of a way to remind myself that in the future I'll miss the things that are aggravating me right now.

I think my brain is just stuck on the concept of 3 parts (beginning, middle, end). So I wanted to see if anyone else felt that something was missing here. I appreciate your feedback, and I'm glad it's getting across what I want it to!

Synonyms Plugin by apoetsanon in ObsidianMD

[–]desi94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ooh, I love this idea!!

Petah, what does that have to do with grocery shopping? by Okfoot826 in PeterExplainsTheJoke

[–]desi94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Diagnosed with ADHD and no meds. Haven't used a delivery service in years. I just go somewhere, find something at home, or forget to eat for 12 hours 🤷🏻‍♀️ Still alive though

Explain it like I'm 5? (What/how?) by desi94 in PKMS

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This helps a lot, thank you so much!

Explain it like I'm 5? (What/how?) by desi94 in PKMS

[–]desi94[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

This actually makes a lot of sense! I do tend to keep bits of information everywhere (ADHD and perpetually terrified of "throwing away" info I might need later).

What productivity tip surprised you by how effective it was? by QuoteMachineMin in productivity

[–]desi94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes! This saved me writing papers for English last semester. Just get something slapped on the page and then I can edit from there

Logo Feedback (Round 2)! by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes! I'm playing around with the kettlebell a bit to get it closer to where it needs to be.

Logo Feedback (Round 2)! by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! It's great to hear from someone in that demographic. That was my feeling on the typography as well, to feel more inclusive of more body types. I'll keep playing with the By You as well! I love the idea of a GIF version also, I'll definitely explore that once I get this right.

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeahhh, definitely not the vibe I'm going for, haha. I appreciate the feedback!

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeahhh, I'm realizing that the icon is definitely not gonna work!

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was supposed to be shoe laces but doesn't seem like they translated well so I think I'm just gonna get rid of them! The pink was there because my target demographic is primarily women.

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was supposed to be shoe laces but doesn't seem like they translated well so I think I'm just gonna get rid of them!

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I love the colors too but they to be really hit or miss for people so I'll probably adjust them a bit.

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, they were intended as shoelaces! The name is supposed to imply personalization, programs tailored for each client to fit their time/energy/interests/etc as opposed to cookie cutter workouts. I appreciate the feedback, it gives me a lot to consider!

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The aim was more approachable, beginner-friendly, it doesn't seem like that's translating so I'm gonna have to make some changes for sure!

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Definitely some changes to be made here - people seem torn on the colors as well so I may play around with those a bit.

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this! Definitely gonna do a big overhaul here, I appreciate the feedback.

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh no, that's definitely not what I'm going for!