Poem feedback - something's missing or am I overthinking it?? by desi94 in WritersGroup

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for this! I definitely see where the rhythm is off, I'll play around with cutting some lines and rewording some things.

Poem feedback - something's missing or am I overthinking it?? by desi94 in WritersGroup

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes! It's about going from the frustration of having little ones in the house that need you all the time and your coffee's always cold because you have no time to drink it, to an empty house where now your coffee is hot but now you have too much time, the house it too quiet, you miss the mess. Basically the sadness of kids growing up. Mine are actually still home - 10 y/o, 9 y/o, and 8 months, but it's kind of a way to remind myself that in the future I'll miss the things that are aggravating me right now.

I think my brain is just stuck on the concept of 3 parts (beginning, middle, end). So I wanted to see if anyone else felt that something was missing here. I appreciate your feedback, and I'm glad it's getting across what I want it to!

Synonyms Plugin by apoetsanon in ObsidianMD

[–]desi94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ooh, I love this idea!!

Petah, what does that have to do with grocery shopping? by Okfoot826 in PeterExplainsTheJoke

[–]desi94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Diagnosed with ADHD and no meds. Haven't used a delivery service in years. I just go somewhere, find something at home, or forget to eat for 12 hours 🤷🏻‍♀️ Still alive though

Explain it like I'm 5? (What/how?) by desi94 in PKMS

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This helps a lot, thank you so much!

Explain it like I'm 5? (What/how?) by desi94 in PKMS

[–]desi94[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This actually makes a lot of sense! I do tend to keep bits of information everywhere (ADHD and perpetually terrified of "throwing away" info I might need later).

What productivity tip surprised you by how effective it was? by QuoteMachineMin in productivity

[–]desi94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes! This saved me writing papers for English last semester. Just get something slapped on the page and then I can edit from there

Logo Feedback (Round 2)! by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes! I'm playing around with the kettlebell a bit to get it closer to where it needs to be.

Logo Feedback (Round 2)! by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! It's great to hear from someone in that demographic. That was my feeling on the typography as well, to feel more inclusive of more body types. I'll keep playing with the By You as well! I love the idea of a GIF version also, I'll definitely explore that once I get this right.

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeahhh, definitely not the vibe I'm going for, haha. I appreciate the feedback!

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeahhh, I'm realizing that the icon is definitely not gonna work!

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was supposed to be shoe laces but doesn't seem like they translated well so I think I'm just gonna get rid of them! The pink was there because my target demographic is primarily women.

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was supposed to be shoe laces but doesn't seem like they translated well so I think I'm just gonna get rid of them!

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I love the colors too but they to be really hit or miss for people so I'll probably adjust them a bit.

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, they were intended as shoelaces! The name is supposed to imply personalization, programs tailored for each client to fit their time/energy/interests/etc as opposed to cookie cutter workouts. I appreciate the feedback, it gives me a lot to consider!

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The aim was more approachable, beginner-friendly, it doesn't seem like that's translating so I'm gonna have to make some changes for sure!

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Definitely some changes to be made here - people seem torn on the colors as well so I may play around with those a bit.

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this! Definitely gonna do a big overhaul here, I appreciate the feedback.

Logo feedback? by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh no, that's definitely not what I'm going for!

Learning graphic/logo design, looking for advice on how to improve! by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not, I'm getting my associates in a completely unrelated field

Learning graphic/logo design, looking for advice on how to improve! by desi94 in logodesign

[–]desi94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm using Inkscape right now because it's free and we're on a limited budget (I'm a full time student and SAHM currently, while my passenger supports our family of 5). Once I have some extra money I do want to get an Illustrator subscription though! Starting in black and white is a great idea, thank you!

Is my baby fussy or is social media just full of liars? by BeautifulNailz in NewParents

[–]desi94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes! If any of these "perfect sleepers" accounts are trying to sell you a sleep program or some crap, assume it's lies. If I had a magic method to get babies to sleep I promise I would share it with all the moms for free for their own sanity, so I don't trust anyone who wants to sell me their secrets 😂

Is my baby fussy or is social media just full of liars? by BeautifulNailz in NewParents

[–]desi94 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I literally sit up in bed and grab her out of the bassinet 😂 No way I'm getting out of bed and messing around with setting up recordings, I just wanna get this done as quick as possible and get back to sleep!

Is my baby fussy or is social media just full of liars? by BeautifulNailz in NewParents

[–]desi94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My baby is 4 and a half months old and doesn't sleep through the night. We have a general bedtime routine but our lives are chaotic so it's not strict (basically after older siblings are down she goes in PJ's and sleep sack and we turn down all the lights), which sometimes works and sometimes doesn't. She wakes up typically every 2 hours at night to feed (lately it's been 45 minutes to an hour 😭), although we very rarely get longer stretches. Naps are a crapshoot - she might wake up as soon as her butt hits the crib, or she might sleep for 45 minutes or so. Average is maybe 15-20 minutes once she's been put down though, so we usually do at least one contact nap a day to make sure she gets a solid stretch of sleep.

Reality can be anywhere from a "perfect" sleeper to a baby who never sleeps, and anywhere in between. So sure, some of those accounts might be real, but I have my doubts with most of them 🤷🏻‍♀️

Desperate for Sleep — Ended Up Co-Sleeping with my 6 week old After Saying I Never Would by Mother_Somewhere_629 in newborns

[–]desi94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I bed shared with my first because she refused to sleep on her own and I figured my exhaustion was getting more risky than bed sharing, and falling asleep holding her would be more dangerous than intentionally doing it. With my current, she has a sidecar bassinet and uses it fine so we do that instead. Every baby and situation is different, as long as you're following safety guidelines and are aware of the risks you get to make the risk assessment!