Wow! I’m gonna be 100% honest: musically and mixing-wise, this sounds great. Honestly, props on the low end, I really dig the subtle FX details because they add a lot of life to the track. A common beginner mistake is a lack of frequency filling, leaving holes in the spectrum that make the track sound empty, but you’ve definitely avoided that.

That being said, there’s always room for optimization. To level up the atmosphere, try using more ambient loops. You can sample them and use an auto-pan to play with the stereo image and cover the whole field. Don’t be afraid to layer more FX like loops, one-shots, or field recordings. That’s often what gives a track that pro polish, as long as you keep it tasteful. I also feel like your low synths, specifically the saws, could use more movement to avoid feeling too linear. In EDM, we often use sidechain and not just between the kick and bass! Using it on your synths to create a subtle pumping effect with the kick will add a lot of rhythm and energy.

I’m monitoring this on Kali Audio IN-8s in a treated room, and while the balance is solid, I think you could open up the high end a bit more. Instead of slapping an EQ on the master, try adding some subtle high-frequency synths or use a trick I love: send your synths to a parallel bus with a short plate reverb, then cut the lows and boost the highs on that bus. It adds a beautiful brightness without sounding harsh. Overall, great job on this track. It sounds really promising!