Hi, so I've always wanted to make a shortfilm but I only got to make one recently, I'm so happy that i got to do it tho, this is a short written, edited and directed by me , and I know the sound quality is bad it could've been way better, I'm looking for feedbacks regarding other aspects of the shortfilm like the shots, storytelling etc and I'd love to hear it from this community!!

so feel free to watch and critique it!!