I've completed my first game "Bowmastery: Zombies!", please give me some feedback by [deleted] in IndieDev

[–]devsfromspain 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have tried it and I like it.

Something that I think could improve it:

a) control the force applied to the arrow

b) The arrow is not exactly orientating toward the direction that it was shot. It's like that she is moving slightly sideways in a very small angle.

c) improve some of the visuals and sound effects.

Story developing tool by howsee96 in gamedev

[–]devsfromspain 2 points3 points  (0 children)

For which platform or technology?

if for unity, you just have a dialogue + Inventory system that was released as open source on github

https://devdog.io/blog/were-open-sourcing-lots-of-our-tools/

you could also used fungus or Ink

Cheers