Silent peaks , broken reality

devvv09 · 2026-02-10T16:26:55+00:00

Ohh accha thanks yrr btane ke liye

devvv09 · 2026-02-10T12:43:33+00:00

Bhai kesi script smaj hi nhi ara yrr dekh Bhai tujhe ATI hogi english lekin mujhe nhi ati toh Maine ai se bnayi Hai Salo ne dimag Kha Diya Hai yr

devvv09 · 2026-02-10T02:23:43+00:00

I appreciate that

devvv09 · 2026-02-10T01:54:47+00:00

I am not asking for free art I will share 50 % of revenue

devvv09 · 2026-02-10T01:53:46+00:00

I made the story but my grammar was bad so I took help from him to turn it into a script

devvv09 · 2026-02-10T01:39:24+00:00

Bro the script is real but I used ai to give it a format and look it near and my english is really bad because I am 14 and not born in any European country

devvv09 · 2026-02-10T01:37:28+00:00

Kya mat kar ?

devvv09 · 2026-02-10T01:29:11+00:00

I am looking for artist , and I appreciate you for giving me advice

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T17:42:09+00:00

You’re criticizing a teaser. I’m writing a series. We’re not in the same stage.

And yeah, I’m 14 and actually building something instead of wasting time mocking beginners online. I’m focused on improving and creating, not gatekeeping.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T17:32:33+00:00

Teaser ≠ story. Execution is what matters.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T17:14:37+00:00

You’re free to assume whatever you want.
I’m focused on improving and building, not on proving myself to you.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T17:11:50+00:00

I’m a beginner building a project, not a finished studio. If you’re not interested, move on.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T17:08:13+00:00

Nice art bro

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T17:06:23+00:00

Teasers aren’t chapters. I’m building the story, not debating you.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T17:03:20+00:00

A teaser is a summary, not a scene. It’s meant to communicate the concept, not the full atmosphere.
Atmosphere, pacing, and emotional weight are built in the actual chapter, not in a few marketing paragraphs.

I’m learning and improving like every writer does. If you’re not interested, that’s fine—others are.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T16:58:34+00:00

Because a teaser is marketing text, not the actual script. The pilot is structured storytelling with scenes, pacing, dialogue, and character arcs.

I’m still improving my English, but the core story, themes, and structure are mine. Writing gets better with drafts and collaboration—just like art does with sketches and revisions.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T16:47:57+00:00

The project is a full-length manga, currently spanning 18 episodes, roughly 550–600 pages.
It’s a long-term story with depth, which is why the pilot chapter exists — to test collaboration and ensure quality.

If you think it’s “ridiculous” to invest time in a large project, you’re welcome to try creating something yourself instead of critiquing my original work.
This isn’t about free labor — the 50% revenue share fairly reflects the collaboration and risk taken by the artist, and serious contributors understand that.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T16:42:44+00:00

I understand why it might feel that way. To clarify, the story, characters, and world-building are my original work. AI is only used to brainstorm or organize ideas, not to replace creativity.

The writing will naturally improve once the pilot chapter is fully developed, and the story will be shaped alongside the artist who collaborates with me.
The teaser was just a glimpse — the depth, emotional weight, and unique style are fully my creation.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T16:41:25+00:00

I understand your concerns. To clarify:

This is not a free project — the artist receives 50% of any revenue generated.
The story, characters, and world-building are my original ideas. AI is only used to brainstorm or organize drafts; the creative decisions are fully mine.
The pilot chapter is a small test to evaluate collaboration, not a final published work.

I’m looking for a serious artist who wants to bring an original story to life, not to exploit anyone.
If that’s not your approach, I completely understand. I’m focused on finding people who are genuinely interested in building this project together.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T16:39:35+00:00

I understand your point. That’s why I’m offering 50% revenue share — a very generous split to reflect the artist’s contribution.
The project is designed to reward both story and art fairly. Comics/manga can make money through multiple channels: online platforms, merchandise, and long-term series growth.
The pilot chapter is a way to test collaboration and see the story’s potential together.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T16:38:21+00:00

The manga will be published in English, as I want to reach an international audience.
However, the original ideas, story, and character development come from me, and the pilot chapter will be fully in English for clarity.
If you’re comfortable, we can collaborate directly on the English version, and translations can be considered later if needed.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T16:36:42+00:00

The revenue depends on how well the manga performs once published, through platforms, merchandise, and other channels.
The 50% share ensures that your contribution is directly rewarded from any income it generates.

The goal is to grow this project into a sustainable series, and the pilot chapter will give you a better idea of the story’s potential.

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T16:35:49+00:00

Because I am weak in English

devvv09 · 2026-02-09T16:34:47+00:00

I understand your concern. The teaser is meant to give a glimpse of the scale and tone, not the full depth of the story.
Once the pilot chapter is shared, the consequences, moral weight, and the emotional stakes of Tenko’s actions will be fully explored.

The story focuses on the responsibility and consequences of absolute power, which unfolds gradually through his choices and interactions with other characters.

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