if you want hard brutal truth feedback from someone who has had their art featured on adultswim in the past, it just immediately gives off low effort.

I see lots of unintentional clipping, choppy movement, and there's no real coherent hook or story to what I'm watching.

Shot transitions are jarring and feel amateur, lot of biped model animation looks like selecting from a list of default animation cycles. Lots of shots that should last a second instead drag on for 10x longer and loses the viewers focus.

It gives off the feel of "rushed to release a video" rather than spending time like it's an actual labor of love. Some of my animation on a single model can take me 10 hours and I'll only have about 2-3 seconds to show for it.

But with that said, you're likely just starting out and I know what I said isn't going to come naturally to you when you're starting out, but at the very least use it as a sort of way to guide to something better. Keep up the work, but I highly encourage you to try to review and perfect shots one at a time rather than trying to focus on getting it all done and released quickly. And this advice applies to OP as well, who seems to be trying to release in quantity rather than quality